Three cheers for some random guy begging for translations by pretending he's done something significant!
It's not even properly cleaned. White brush aimlessly over text leaving behind bits and pieces of text randomly. Bubbles and patterns not repaired. Any editor with any shred of self-worth would re-do from the start.
If you want to actually contribute, read some guides on how to properly clean and typeset, then get yourself some real editing work. https://lmgtfy.com/?q=manga+editing+guide