The art style is sort of spastic, and it's not particular consistent, but some of the expression are nailed so well I just don't care - great work on the art! Also, this looks like an interesting plot. I'm looking forward to more of this!
Gotta admit, I loved how judy looked, first panel page 5. Talk about your armor piercing question. Now what I wanna know is if Judy will remember her old lessons...I hope the comic will continue.