edit: added the missing page and fixed a line. big sorry.

it's missing page after 14

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Admiralk got an after REKT on Akagi.

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I told you not to use the office

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they really should make bomber grape the official artist for official kancolle doujin, and get an anime series that's on par with danshi koukousei no nichijou.

i'll literally slam wads of cash onto my screen if that happened.

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should be near the NCR Camp McCarran in page 26

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fucking Todd, why the fuck FO4 so damn glitchy

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This Admiral needs to die a very long, slow, and painful death. And I'm only on page 3....

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Who knew Bomber Grape could write drama?

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20-odd pages of entertainment beats out almost every official pulp publication relating to KanColle. Who would've thunk? Bomber Grape is a man with talent.

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@NoIceCream?

You do know it's supposed to be comedy, right? Bomber Grape is known for this kind of style... To be honest I think these kinds of comments are nearly as bad, if not worse, than those on vanilla works where the neckbeards are like "lucky bastard...". No one cares, just stroke the snake/flick the bean and if you have something to say about the work itself, do it, otherwise stop posting irrelevant cancer in the comments.

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@NoIcecream?

I don't know this guy is stupid or just retarded.

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@RKGS

Yes, I know this is "comedy." I have read a number of BG works and enjoyed them. Including this one. However, the fact that the Admiral depicted here is an utter and complete asshole for comedic value does not change the fact that he is an utter and complete asshole. Speaking of comedy, it's blatantly obvious that you care enough to post a negative reply to my opinion, yet you use the always inaccurate phrase No one cares. Gives me a laugh every time. What exactly is a "Neckbeard?" For now I'm going to assume it's just another ignorant, prejudiced term for someone who thinks or acts differently from you. So it's not ok for someone to say a guy surrounded by beautiful women is lucky but it is ok for you to tell me to stop thinking for myself and just masturbate? Although I enjoyed the read, I did not find anything in this dojin suitable for that purpose. And finally, do you honestly consider a negative opinion about something to be irrelevant cancer? If so, you are going to have a VERY hard time with a large percentage of the internet. There is no such thing as an irrelevant opinion. Look, if you think this Admiral is awesome because he tried to choke Haruna to death then just say so. That's fine. It's your opinion. Mine just happens to be the opposite, that's all.

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“”Do you really want to keep going without ships" is not what the Japanese line means. It should mean "It(Air refresher) is really has nothing to do with ships"

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Military discipline at its finest

Good admiral is good

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wow by wink 1989

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