You can find my previous comic here: /g/822646/8be6ff8754/
This is a reboot version, same main character but different story, still incomplete though.
If you've found any grammar errors or typos please let me know, I'm not so good at writing in English.
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For now I will leave it in Western category (although I'm not westerner, I look like an Japanese man I swear).
Any idea/suggestion is welcome! The story is still not completely set!

THREESOME, PAIZURI.
Ehem, I mean, it looks really good m8. I love your style!

Base +10, Epion +25, jfragrettel +7, Maxsteele +8

I would say that it needs some incest, but that would be kinda forced. But the way this is going, it feels that they're going to spy on her, she might get pissed or she'll let them fuck her.

Base +13, jfragrettel +7, Maxsteele +8

What's with the downvote?

Base +7, jfragrettel +7, Maxsteele +8, Surviva +6, Palaxius -30, MelmothTheWanderer +37

Doesnt matter if you look Japanese or not , pretty much anything not made from Japan/Taiwan/South Korea gets tagged western and the last two usually get tagged as Doujinshi

Base +6, Kiranta +6, jfragrettel +7, Toushiroo +9, Maxsteele +8, Surviva +6, Lesamuen +6

Here's hoping for vanilla goodness.

Base +1, Kiranta +6, jfragrettel +7, lucilomar +6, Maxsteele +8, Surviva -6, stupid army -7, MelmothTheWanderer -30

Why is this one in the western category, while the first one is not?
Just curious.
Nvm, I should put more attention before posting, lol.

Base +9, jfragrettel +7, Maxsteele +8, Surviva +6

Just for now it looks amazing, NTR+shota+mind break,,, this guy is way better than many japanese hentai artist that work in the montly COMIC magazines. I really hope he gets hired by one of them

Base +6, jfragrettel +7, Toushiroo +9, Maxsteele +8, Surviva +6, NiGHTS4life -7

Why would you reboot the exact same shitty ntr story. Enough of trash like that already exists and you've already done the story.

Base +12, Maxsteele -8, FarkyMac +6, Surviva -6, Ranpoe -7, sirleirbag +9, hZi -11, DattacK -7, DubCat -11, qaz441 -2, don45 -6, Bon Voyage -5, Ligera -6, and 9 more...

I remember your old work! it was really REALLY well done!

can not wait to see how this turns out.

as for ideas, hmmm, for NTR I guess a girl being passed around while having sex is a rare scene? I only saw that like atotal of 2 or 3 times in another doujins.

Or making the girl be for Public use? (teachers and all the other school employees?)

Blackmail/rape/drugs are such an insanely common tropes so it would be nice if you change it up a bit.

but ultimately, a Vanilla end would be super awesome

Base +6

I like the way you have driven the story, to some extenct very similar of what I write. Digging the new art, not western at all.
The only thing I dislike here are those text bubbles, seems exactly as those used in shitty rewrites.

Base +6

@camaleon666: shit I felt the same too, is it because of fonts I used? or bubbles' shapes? any idea?

Base +9

GB: alternative sequel of "A TG Project" by the same author.

Base +14

六级没白学，不过还是求汉化看得舒服点

Base +5