Well... the firts point, your drawing skills are just perfect in my opinion, nothing I can complain about that , without almost any text you are able to express what you are trying to say, thing that not everyone is able to do.
The only thing I could complain is that it is to childish but is just my opinion.
In general I give a 4.5 .
Good job man

Last edited on 30 December 2016, 01:24.

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@dekir Ha thanks for your message, super glad you like it!
Ha I see what you mean for the childish side, the part 3 will be more nsfw for sure but I wanted to put a little background between them first~
Thanks again!

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the fire has abdominals and it's not like, a chest made of fire
it's a kratos level trimmed pack of fire-abs

god damn flame atronachs

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I love the comic. Your art skills are amazing. But I see you referred to a sequel to this as part three. Did you MEAN part 2, or is this 2? If so, where can I see part 1? (And a quick side question, when will the next part land, if at all?)

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that girl is frisk

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