Hey, thanks for reading.

No, thanks to you, short but sweet as honey!

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afterword page
>original manga by oryou(maybe?/soon?)
hype mode activated

RAW:/g/1017598/3c06e0e0b0/

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MORE IROHA! HEIL! HOORAY! HUZZAH! Iroha best girl. <3

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First of all, let me say that I'm truly grateful for the translation - it's always nice to read more Yahari doujins and I appreciate all the time you took to post this, especially if you also had to edit the speech bubbles, redraw, etc.

That being said, I hope you don't take it as a personal attack or anything if I point out a few mistakes:
- Pg 4: "Don't you feel excited doing these [things]?" Unless, the original text actually meant "these" as in Iroha's breasts or something, I'm assuming that the sentence is incomplete.
- Pg 4: "Recently, Hikki [hasn't come here very often]" Tense issue.
- Pg 5 "What did I just [say]..."
- Pg 8: "Did you [drink/swallow] it all?", "I drank all of [it]"
- pg 9: " {I'm ] feeling horny"
- pg 12: "You might [have to take responsibility] if you ..."

Overall, it's still fairly readable though, so I hope you aren't discouraged from doing more translations.

Last edited on 16 January 2017, 00:20.

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There's plenty of other mistakes. It is readable, but yes, please proofread.

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"lingerie" tag: "Skimpy or sexy undergarments that are worn to increase sex appeal; as opposed to regular undergarments."

I could be missing something, but those look like "regular undergarments" to me.

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