Comic drawn by Utopia from comiket 90 included in the doujinshi Pyua Nomi! Fes from Marunomare

Translation by me

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it is ending? shit

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doujin is very long, but i will almost certainly continue traslating it, that is if someone doesn't anticipate me :p

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@ chijinda96

You're the translator? Cool.

I don't know if its the original text or if it was translated too literally, but a lot of the text feels stiff and mechanical.

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yes i know, i'm not english native so i make a lot of mistakes that sometimes i dont even notice (but that's what they're saying, literally or not, of that i'm sure :D)

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Nice translation. I believe the line where she says "doll" twice though, should actually mean "mermaid". It´s pronounced nearly the same in japanese and makes more sense - since she is a mermaid.

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yes but since the one talking is wakasagihime that replies to kagerou i thought that the fittest was doll but i'm not sure, thanks for the correction

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Okay, there isn't a lot right now... but that was hella cute and lovely!~

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