Pg. 16 is not translated.

Base +9, onlyregistere -12

This translation is simply terrible.

Base +6, glasnost +11, moldbar +6, heh...narto +6, chequerboard +6, mrkitteh +7, waltergeist +9, buuda +6, pen_ +6, DRAGONRULER +6, Blood_lad10 +6, Tarball +13, pkplat +4, and 1 more...

Shoukaku?? Prostate massage??
Instant FAV!!!!

Base +6, iamclu +6, Blood_lad10 +6, Hyoros +8, Rod_Perv +6

>added 2017-02-28 12:26
>added 2017-02-28 12:29

STUPID LAMER!

Base +6, Juggernaut Santa -23, Tsutiya -3, Nakimura Saigo -6, Machiga -7, crazymagic -12

I didn't realize you don't have to know either English or Japanese to excrete translations.

Base +8, moldbar +6, Owyn +25, Unst99 +6, heh...narto +6, onlyregistere -12, waltergeist +9, buuda +6, zafrin +6, DRAGONRULER +6, Hyoros -8, Teh_Red_Guy +5, pkplat +4, and 4 more...

really bad english

half star

Base +7, onlyregistere -12, zafrin +6, Hyoros -8, moldbar +6, Shino22 +7

translation may aswell be a rewrite with how it is currently...

Base +7, onlyregistere -12, Hyoros -8, Glovelove. -7, moldbar +6, Shino22 +7

thanks for the translation!

Base +5, Nakimura Saigo -6, Hyoros +8, Shino22 -7

This is the first time I've ever felt dumber from reading a Doujin

Base +7, onlyregistere -12, AloofSloth +8, pen_ +6, Hyoros -8, Shino22 +7

poor grammar is more than this deserve

shame because doujin is so good

Base +7

I don't even..I could probably mentally translate the RAW to english better than this.

Base +6

Thank you very much for even translating this, as I had been hoping for it. You might however want to find a native speaker of English to clean up the grammar because it's currently in a bit of a weird spot. Reminds me of vintage CGRascal ;)

Base +6, Gloom89 +6, Hyoros -8, zangetsu96 +7

Definitely needs cleaning up. Reads like something churned up by a machine translator.
As a commissioned work, I'd feel cheated.

Base +6, moldbar +6

its so painfull i cant read this anymore :(

Base +7, Hyoros -12, moldbar +6