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Language "English". Just fucking barely.

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We get signal. Someone set up us the bomb.

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Your base are belong to us.

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If it wasn't for the grammar, this story would be excellent! It holds a lot of potential, I think.
I'll rate it at 5/5 because I like the artwork and content of fetishes so much !

But as the others suggest... Please clean the grammar even though you can read it for fun. If segregated from the gallery.

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God damn, this is great, I'm always up for seeing some bound prisoners being sexually tormented, so yeah, great stuff indeed, thanks a lot :)

For tagging purposes, please don't tag this as "poor grammar" (again), this is an OEL and is exempt from that tag as such.

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What a beautiful Duwang.
Chew.
There must be no place as pretty as this town.
This feels like a picnic

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Honestly the artwork is great! But yeah, english is not....great.

Base +6, klaphest +6, n00ps +6, Xymena +6, AllyBots_Prime +5

I could tell yout this was be so much fun ..

Base +5

This is some Backstroke of the West type shit that we're on here

Base +6, kurtis -8, danticat420 +5, AllyBots_Prime +5

What is OEL and how does that make this exempt from getting the "Poor Grammar" tag?

Does it being OEL mean this is good grammar? "The story begin when our ship get attacted by highly advance alien battle ship"

Base +6, Xymena +6, n00ps +6, kurtis -8, braincoral999 +7, Pierzak +6, smileyrat +6

^
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Feel free to add "poor grammar " Tag.

I would be appreciated if you could help me on grammar correction.

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When will the next page come out?

Base +6, Hairyhair +6

This is great if only the english was actually not terrible... if someone could translate it from shit english to actual english, it would be great.

Base +7, AllyBots_Prime +5

Absolutely one of the sexiest things I've seen when you put it out. Been checking each month or two since then for updates. I really would love to see more.

Base +6, Ledas Secret +6

For a sequel I'd love to see the girls managing to escape and struggling with their situation. They'd be caught between disgust and humiliation on one hand and temptation and pleasure on the other hand, resulting in sweet anguish and a full identity crisis. Also, what would they do? Report back and risk being disappeared to a secret research facility? Try to hide their transformation and start a new life with new identity, hidden from the government? Or give in to the urges and return to the aliens who would give them endless pleasure?

Base +18

I don't understand why the body swap.
Perhaps the story would have been improved because Girl A was killed in the fight so they revived her with Boy A's parts. so it made sense to stick his brain in her body.
otherwise it just seems a pointless exercise.

Would also like to see the supposed results of the alien research.

Base +5

The erotic horror experiments in this gallery are really sexy with a lot of tense emotion and feeling in them. I am looking forward to seeing more.

Please give this an english translation if you have the time though. The artist themself is requesting grammar correction. It would be great if someone could work with them on it to make this piece even better.

Art 7. Plot 8. Sexiness 8. English 3. All out of 10.

Base +8, Bonbon88 +6

I hope you one day update/rework this, it does not matter which one to me
help for grammar
Page 2
/This/ story begin/s/ when our ship get/s/ /attacked/ by Highly advance/d/ alien battleship
Shit!! /They/ will kill us all
Page 3
Hey!! /W/hy /did/ you just shock him instead of kill/ing/ him
Because we /already have/ control of this ship
And /the/ captain just order me to capture one of /the/ male/s/ alive to do /the/ brain transfer experiment
We will transfer his brain in to one of /the/ three female/s/ that we capture/d/ earlier to do reproduction experiment
/last line I have no idea what the intent of so I will not guess
Page 4
first line is fine
Ah!! There are /the/ girl/s/ /here/ too, what happen/ed/
the rest is good enough
Page 5
Shit!! What /have they/ done to me
rest is good enough
Page 6
Hey /was/ the brain transfer success/ful/
Nope ... Her brain wave/s/ /have/ not change/d/
Let's activate her brain restraint device and continue the experiment
No need, just turn on the translation part The brain transfer must /have/ turn/ed/ her brain back to /an/ infant state now
this line is fine
Let's continue the experiment we will impregnate her with the bug
Page 7
Shit!! /I/t/'s/ put/ting/ something in me
Page 8
fine
Page 9
fine
Page 10
Her condition is good the impregnation process /is/ going smoothly
Page 13
After being impregnated,I pretended to follow follow the /alien's/ orders. I've been sent to some kind of room.
In this room, I saw /the/ other two girls /undergo/ some sort of sinister experiment.
Page 19
Ruby was also undergoing the same experiment with /a/ larger creature
That is all I saw hope it helps

Base +2

Is it over? Or there'll be more?

Base +2

I check the author's patreon and this doujin are not in there. but idk, still didnt pay it

Base +2