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Commissioned by Shell
Translations and Editing by Seven
Proofreading by Zero

First time I've ever been commissioned to retranslate something that's already been done. Also first Naruto commission.

-Seven

raw: /g/791983/ef9a7d6b40/

alternate translation: /g/795339/2dd549bc7b/

NO NO NO NO, NO ALL THE WAY TO HELL AND BACK!!!!!

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This galary has already been uploaded by: Karvakasa.

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Excellent quality on the images,
I'm assuming he used the digital version, nice alternate translation too.

I wonder if Naruhodou will ever do a sequel to this doujinshi?

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Dammit Sasuke why do you have to ruin everything?

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@flame700 Sasuke is not even in this and your blaming him leave my boy alone

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I hope to see a sequel with ino-chan join in the party with sakura and hinata ;)

Last edited on 28 April 2017, 07:03.

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L A M B S A U C E L O C A T E D

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@fudragon146: The girls plainly state on page 3 that they're doing this solely so Cloud will forgive Sasuke.The entire reason any of this takes place is Sasuke. So it is accurate to blame him for that much. Him appearing or not appearing is a non-factor. And judging from the ending, this whole sequence of events will have to take place a second time just to pacify the Raikage. So if we get a sequel, I'd blame Sasuke for that, too. Happily, though.

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the raw is the digital version: /g/1019062/15db61cd6e/

not the scan you linked

otherwise, big ups! this translation is significantly better!

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"But if it means helping Sasuke-kun then sucking a smegma covered dick or two is nothing."

If that's not love I don't know what is.

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