And people make fun of CGrascal for bad grammer.

From what I got of the story basically the husband got drunk during a reunion, cheated on his wife, felt like crap, came clean and apologized, his parents apologized and in the end she decided to have revenge sex to get back at him.

Get a divorce dude.

Edit: Oh right and it was his younger brother she did it with.

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This is some Laruffii tier shit

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For me the garter belt dis most the work on this work...

But what have me wondering (a lot), is why in the last page it says "Thanks" where is suposed to go "End".

Anyone knows?

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Jesus the grammar is horrible.

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Loving this Aoi Hitori party lately...

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The grammar is bad, but I am giving the writer points for being one of the few writers to not just force in the line "you're much bigger than him", like most pointlessly do. My comment is always "do they need to be"? I'm sure we can stomach that they are enjoying themselves without that pointless line.

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@Loki The Flameshield

The point does not lie with the character enjoying, but to the reader of the doujin who enjoy the NTR'ed guy is inferior to the stealer, which a reason (among others, like neglect) for the woman to cheat, because having this superior tool get her more pleasure than her husband/boyfriend.

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@Evyy I get that, but that can be accomplished without that cliche line. There are many ways to make a guy seem inferior. Just using that seems lazy. Hell you just named a few. For example: Husbands has been gone for two years, Jodie moves in and and fucks the wife for a couple years. Do you need to add that line? I'm just saying it shows a lack of creativity. It feels like a checkmark at this point. Or even awkward in some cases. I know this is just reading to much into porn, but I just think the writer just lacks creativity when that line comes in. That isn't just in ntr, that's any genre. Even vanilla pulls that crap too much and I just role my eyes when it does.

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So guy gets drunk, bangs someone, feels remorse, tells his wife and his parents and brother for some reason, his wife decides to get revenge and bang her husbands brother, her husband ends up with an NTR fetish, so the little bro gets to bang his sister in law presumably forever.

Wow, what a good deal the little bro gets out of this

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Revenge By Video

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@Loki The Flameshield
you got a small dick or why are you so upset?

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