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(C87) [Tougall Kai (Kairakuen Umeka)] Susume Yurime (Yama no Susume) [English] [/u/ Scanlations]

(C87) [東ガル会 (快楽園梅香)] ススメ百合目 (ヤマノススメ) [英訳]

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Posted:2017-05-13 05:16
Parent:1062261
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:19.96 MiB
Length:18 pages
Favorited:37 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.41

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Posted on 13 May 2017, 05:16 by:   alienine    PM
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Visit the /u/ translation thread if you can provide translations, editing, or QC

Next time I will have to read it the whole way through first to see if it's worth working on.

Raws from /g/800065/ed9753c4a6/

EDIT-Fixed errors
Posted on 12 May 2017, 02:44 by:   25toLife    PM
Score +11
There is no Yuri; I was lied to.
Posted on 12 May 2017, 06:51 by:   piotrek    PM
Score +6
Are you sure you know what yuri is, 25tolife?
Posted on 12 May 2017, 10:46 by:   Threedice    PM
Score +6
p15: "I thought you were still I thought you were still mountaineering"
Posted on 12 May 2017, 14:41 by:   mutopis    PM
Score +6
>pg 15 "I thought you were still" said twice
>pg 16 "repelnish" should be "replenish"
Posted on 12 May 2017, 15:19 by:   zenith45    PM
Score +12
Yeah, Hikari does seem like the type who drinks a lot of protein supplements.
Posted on 13 May 2017, 03:03 by:   mutopis    PM
Score +6
the errors are still there

pg 15, "I thought you were still I thought mountaineering" should be "I thought you were still mountaineering"
pg 16, "relplenish" should be "replenish"
Posted on 13 May 2017, 03:15 by:   aurumauriga    PM
Score +38
I was about to make a new torrent, but upon checking:

p.12: "uneasesed"
I think you were going for "uneased." At any rate, contextually it should be "uneasy."

p.15: "I thought you were still I thought mountaineering"
Makes no sense whatsoever. "I thought you were still mountaineering"

p.16: "relplenish"
Yeah, it's still wrong. "replenish."

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