Story is good but... Doesn't she looks strangely close to a man in many of these shots (apart from the boobs)? And those nose lines look like mustache at times. ^^ For most parts it's alright though, so not out to flame or anything, but it kinda gives you the lols at times.^^
Thank you CaptionCaption for uploading! It's sad that its been downvoted so much for being shojo or whatever, but I just wanted to let you know that there are also people out there who appreciate this greatly. Thanks again!