Much HQ Version: /g/1969357/cfc62aa1f1/

Sooo I've been working this for a bit while doing RL stuff and when I noticed the translated version be uploaded, I was a bit disappointed but then I was surprised. With complete respect towards the Editor because he "tried" to do something, he didn't do crap to make the pages look clean or even decent and typesetting was horrid. On top of that, some of the translations were incorrect so I kept on working on my version to upload it. Unfortunately, I was supposed to have upload this two days ago but ALL of the files got corrupted and I had to work on them from scratch. That wasn't any kind of fun whatsoever. So from shit to decent if I can be honest.

So here's a Remake with better translation and better editing. If you guys see anything out of place, let me know. Also, my translator is working on the Afterword as we speak so once I get that script and have it edited on the Afterword, I'll immediately update the page.

I know last time I posted a list of doujins I was going to work on but some things have changed. My next project right now is the latest and by far the most amazing Valkyrie Drive Doujin I seen out right now by Diogenes Club. After that, it's Maid Fuku Futanari Doujin from Musashino Sekai. In addition to that, I'll be helping my translator, Kargarok1 who worked on the Kawaraya Honpo's Eva Futanari doujin and Remastering that to have better typesetting so it doesn't look so intrusive while reading. Haha I know, 3 futanari doujins straight for the next projects. Don't worry, I do have other doujins that are related to a series Okawari is running.

Raw: /g/1067316/9883758638/
Editor: God Revan
Translator: Kargarok1

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Thank you for the translation and typesetting. I admire your dedication for this doujin.

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@Shakuganaexa- You're welcome. Had to work hard to make the scans look passable. Certain things didn't look like but if I continued fucking with them, they would look way too defused and would remove alot of the line-work detail once you're close up to the image. I did that mistake once already with one of the pages and had to redo them because I knew it looked like crap.

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Love Mizuryu Kei works.

Only error I can remember seeing in the translation was on page 15, where Lunafreya said 'I must not allow the Fleuret family line end'
It looks like it's supposed to be 'line to end' there.

Anyway, great work, your effort is definitely appreciated.

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@Bandages- Ooh good catch. Definitely a typo on my part. I'll updated once I get the script for the Afterword.

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There's a joke to be made about how even Final Fantasy XV hentai can't escape being initially released as a mess and needs more time to be polished for the best experience.

Thank you for your work!!

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And here I was hoping the bigger file size meant a better scan..

/sigh

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@Marien- Technically you can read the text better but yeah, even if one is a great editor, they would have a massively hard time getting those scans to look good and/or take a long time and alot of work to make them look even more cleaner than what I just presented.

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lol I love how Aranae looked in this ....they made her look so old in the game but she always seemed more around the same age as the other female leads....I don't know why but I kinda wanted to see at the end both Noctis and Gladio appear behind him ready to kill him....just thought it would be funny as hell

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Hnnng that feeling when the main female protagonist gets more char development in 12 pages of a doujin than in the main game.

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@SerafX

underrated comment

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Translation and typesetting is better but the editing is just painful to look at.

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