Alot of interesting Ideas in here. I like the fact the the main character is depicted as a blank void, I like the fact that the blank void is obviously playing the game instead of just having sex and I like the fact that the girl is just stupidly naive about all those facts.
I also like th style of using elongated human figures, but I think the artwork need more refinement though. The head of the girl on page 9 was pretty bad.