@everyone Would you take a Naganami to the beach?
S_K's first attempt at being of any use. Now with a title page.

Raw used: /g/1065467/021403cd94/

https://www.doujinshi.org/book/881573/
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=54251495
https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=152107
http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/article/04/0030/38/22/040030382299.html

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naisu desu ne

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I want to exercise with Naganami too.

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Any particular reason you decided to not upload the cover, but remembered to put credits page in?

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'Swum' isn't a word. 'Swam' is the word you were looking for, past-tense of 'swim'.

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@spierdalacaz We're idiots and forgot about it.

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@NotSwordfish Swum is a participle used in present perfect and past perfect tense, meaning that an event has recently completed ('have') or completed in the distant past ('had').

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@spierdalacz The only piece of the doujin that didn't need editing was the cover, whoops.

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I'd reccomend you guys level the pages for your next time around so you don't have pitch-black text on a page where everything else is a gray. Good work otherwise though.

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@noKeysBruh Yeah, there are a lot of mistakes on our part, but hopefully what we do next will be better.

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Dat random Yamato at the end

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> No reproduction, republication or scanlation/translation without written permission

> Sorry dude. If you find this, your shit is cute and we couldn't resist.

Okay, that credits page comment made me laugh. His shit really is cute.

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