Completed translation which was started by DangerousDave for pilitikitron on Amazonlove.org but left incomplete after the 77th page. Couldn't duplicate original font but story is unchanged.

The art is ok but the story is bad.

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/g/472281/c35962861c/ (original)

Good stuff, thanks a lot for all the hard work and sharing :)

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No problem. Piltikitron began the translation years ago, and I always thought that it would be a shame if it was never completed.

@GGS, I think I've seen this similar reception to his stories before. Visually the art is good but he's not received as the best story-teller. I think one part is the translation issue. If I'd done more to smooth out the English from the Spanish (which I do a bit of in the parts that I translated) it might read a bit better. Still, his art is amazing and the story is pretty simple A to B as a tribute to his Amazons and their feats. I don't mind as much as others but your criticism is welcome. Perhaps Piltikitron reads these as well. If you have some advice for him you can message him.

Last edited on 18 December 2017, 01:43.

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