Story with added dialogue from Amazonlove.org posts by Piltikitron. Story and artwork by Piltikitron. Initial post from August 18, 2012. Did not bother fixing to much of the grammar since it already reads pretty well so don't mind the few grammatical and spelling issues. This is straight from the page for the most part.
Most of the comics/manga/doujin I've read that have had 2 different "ends" had the "good" ending first, then the bad. This one flipped it. Somewhat interesting.
Not a problem. Just wanted to post the actual story for anyone who wanted it. I can understand how the pictures might be rated higher than the pictures with the actual story, but it is what it is. I didn't write it so I don't take it personally and it's one of his earlier stories he has a wide range of stories. It's the completionist in me that inspired me to add the dialogue and post it. I liked it well enough though, but I'm not as picky.