Well, better this then some group of nasty fat dark skinned old scum, like in those other many doujins. That cover looks amazing, though it would've been better if it was page 03 colored instead. And what's up with island? Looks artificial. Also, her "granddaddy" looks like freaking "Drayden" from PKMN gen 5, the 8'th gym leader.
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