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Body Thief (english )

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Hevn  PM
Posted:2017-09-06 21:56
Parent:1108720
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Language:English  
File Size:101.4 MiB
Length:138 pages
Favorited:229 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.96
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Posted on 06 September 2017, 21:56 by:   Hevn    PM
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Hello everybody ! I finally propose my comic in English after all this time.

I want to clarify, that I am not very good in English and that I helped to google translate

Good reading. !
Posted on 08 August 2017, 18:46 by:   kirbyland    PM
Score +10
Finally! Thank you!
Posted on 08 August 2017, 18:54 by:   Hevn    PM
Score +6
@kirbyland : you're welcome :)
Posted on 09 August 2017, 09:48 by:   leycrimsonriver    PM
Score +6
I want moar, will there be more?
Posted on 10 August 2017, 05:23 by:   kashiri    PM
Score +10
@leycrimsonriver

hes got bunch more in his native language...
Posted on 10 August 2017, 06:50 by:   just for for fun    PM
Score +4
just a little bit like the Body Transfer,but the more the better, still thanks for translation XD
Posted on 10 August 2017, 07:54 by:   神渊之龙    PM
Score +12
Interseting story,I'll wait for more!
Posted on 18 August 2017, 22:54 by:   asheevee    PM
Score +6
I'm terribly excited.
Posted on 31 August 2017, 08:11 by:   Jazzy81    PM
Score +28
This does not make any sense.
So Dai goes to a doctor's appointment while on vacation. Weird enough, but even though they just arrived, apparently he hasn't shown up for appointments with the same doctor twice before.
Then the doctor (Reika) turns out to be the girlfriend of an old friend (Leiko) of his girlfriend (Loli).
After the swap Leiko doesn't recognize Dai's body, but then Reika explains that she stole Dai's body because Leiko liked it so much. How can she have said she liked it if she didn't even recognize it minutes before? Later in the story it becomes apparent that Leiko doesn't even know Loli has a boyfriend, so it seems likely that she has indeed never met Dai.
This storyline is a mess.
Posted on 31 August 2017, 19:44 by:   Hevn    PM
Score +13
@ Jazzy81Score

Hello and thank you for your comment. As I explained on my post in French this is my first story in comic, I committed a lot of mistakes and inconsistencies. I apologize and I will correct this for the following comic comedy that arrives soon.
Posted on 08 September 2017, 21:50 by:   TwiTwi    PM
Score +6
Yeah, the English is really bad. But it's fun to read and I am excited for more! Five stars from me :D

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