Don't see why this is SO poorly rated. Writing isn't so bad you can't read it, fetishes aren't so poorly done or weird that no one can get into it, and the panels aren't so poorly rendered it looks like potatoes. This is an alright little piece.
Plenty of small shitty things going on here. 1. bad composition, it just looks kinda slow and awkward 2. too many face closeups, amateur 3d faces just look horrible 3. no reason for this to be set in the witcher universe 4. kinda unfitting expressions and a lot of other minutiae. I have seen better rated worse stuff, but this definitely isn't that great imo.
Base +7, tggirl -1, BenWhite93101 +5, TheLonliestMonk +6, ryz96 -5
"The difference between you and I, Witcher, is you destroy monsters...I create them". This is portrayed as a cool line, but all it means is that the Witcher destroys whatever you create.