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Last edited on 17 June 2017, 13:01.

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The reading order of the speech bubbles on page 2 makes no sense to me. Is this read right-left or left-right? It seems right-left. Thus the conversation seems to start on that page with panel 2's "Stop your whining..." but the bubble above it is in response? So we're to read from the bottom of the panel to the top? But then the next panel (reading right-left) has the ellipsed sentence end with the middle panel, then we read up for a response, then down to the third panel? So the full dialogue for the page reads:

"Oh stop your whining, we're fine."
"Yeah you're fine. I'm slowly being drained...now we're both gonna die out here cuz you got greedy."
"You have more than enough power..."
"All our problems vaporized with that ship."

If you take line 3 (more than enough power) as an interrupt that happens between the ellipse, then it seems like such a lengthy interrupt would have them talking over each other. Am I getting this right? Can I suggest you think on re-ordering the speech bubbles? I feel there is little flow to the conversation, and the inconsistent direction to read is confusing.

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I don't know actually, none of this makes any sense to me either, and its not just about speech bubbles order. To be honest it would be way better without speech bubbles at all. I feel like loosing brain cells when I try to read or understand this so I suggest you to not pay any attention to the text in this.

Last edited on 17 June 2017, 22:49.

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What the hell is happening in here? Is this sexual content? The artist managed to turn something with potential to pure garbage anyway gj

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I don't know either. Seems like the mess in doxy head get worse every day. You can tell how bad it is by reading stuff he writes on his twitter.

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Guys, what's with the confusion. It's clearly a left-to-right comic.

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Can someone explain what's going on here?

Base +6, xburner337 +6, ominator +7, CrossRook +7, tadpolegaming +3

I don't care about the dialogue. More futanari FROTTAGE for the win

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Is.. Is that supposed to be ZoDee? What did Doxy do to her? She looks so weird now! D:

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Holy fuck 20 pages of NOTHING

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Will this not be shit at some point?

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I love this shit its wrll written entertaining to read cant wait to see what happrns next

Base +1, tadpolegaming +4, shunkaha -6, Hyoros -15

What a waste of a good character. If they just did NSFW content from the beginning, they could -stop- at page 20.

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glad to see i'm not the only one that doesn't get what's going on at all

Base +6, tadpolegaming +4, Hyoros -15

So is this dead, or was it finished and never released here?

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