http://desudesu.fakku.net/

Commissioned by sailor1980

You can see the girl in the locket in the center of the cover, lol. Seems pretty obvious how she's going to turn out.

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http://desudesu.fakku.net/ doesn't work for me. It allways change from .net to .io and the last entry was october 2016. Something wrong with this site?

Last edited on 28 September 2017, 06:35.

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A shame only this first chapter is about this rich girl... Not only her stereotype, her design is also very much up my alley.

But it's nice to see some new Miyahara Ayumu translation, it's been quite a while.

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Page 45, anyone else notice that super-long line to his mouth? Wtf.

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Oh wow, page 30, pretty sure that's suppose to bend like that.

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@TigerB just email him using the gmail on the site

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actual plot? no way!! who am I kidding.

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TigerB : Just email me bro.

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This kind of reminds me of Garden.

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Uncensored and hot as fck! The best Hentai I have seen in long time :3

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A play through of Slave Maker? lol

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i actually laughed at the MCs motivation

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Wait she was a ghost? i'm so confused now

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Holy Crap, who knew Nagi was going to be trained- except everyone, and Fox ruined it in the promos. -What a surprise this is!

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@asdasd135

"Wait she was a ghost? i'm so confused now"

Given Kaito said that he'll find a caretaker for Nagi, I would say he's imagining him talking to the Nagi he knew before she asked him to break her.

Also, any mention of when volume 4 is finished being translated?

Last edited on 04 October 2017, 15:50.

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so what happen to Nagi? the trainer will sell her?

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@firewing02

As I mentioned before, Kaito said he'll be taking Nagi to a caretaker, so I guess no on selling Nagi.

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The last story was so vanilla it helped balance out the tank.

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Thanks for the translation. The story started out good with an interesting premise, but it tanked really fast once Nagi wanted to be trained because it was so random and pointless. I wish they added some conflict between Nagi and the childhood friend.

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became a trainer to train her but instead use the money to buy her anyways.
i mean he got the girl iguess

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The main story was fun, though the last story was kind of pointless and a mood killer in all honesty.

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Pretty lackluster ending to the main story.

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Mixed feelings about this one. The art is nice and the core scenario is fine. The unrelated final chapter, 'spoilers' for the story within the first few pages, and general unused potential kind of brought the whole thing down.

Would have really liked it if the fate of Dolls, how 'Happy' Dolls are, and wanting to become a Doll were explored more rather than an unrelated filler at the end.

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By combining the lines "For some reason no matter how hard I try, my methods just fail to work on Koharu..." and "I think it's now my turn to be broken" meaning that his knowledge as trainer is lacking, he need to train more (yeah, I demand a sequel!)

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