Translator: Herreis
Editor: Baran
Proofreader: Grink
Commissioner: Me (Rick)

www.hennojin.com/scanslation/

He salamied the jabami

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The facial expression is too soft...like more seriousness and ahegao like in the manga and anime would be good :^)

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It's not bad, but Yumeko's erotic tendencies is fixated on the gamble itself and not so much the reward or loss. The higher the amount, the greater the danger, the more she gets off on it. So far in the manga, she's been in debt hundreds of millions of yen and didn't even blink an eye at it. She made all of it back and more and did the equivalent of a shrug.

In all honesty, I'm suprised that Yumeko didn't have an over/under bet on how fast the male came, and how many times she was able to make him do it. ;)

@ gearan: True you do have a point. Although who's to say that someone is outside the room with a stop watch and a pad of paper taking notes? ;)

Last edited on 28 September 2017, 17:01.

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@RRViper that would make too much sense for a hentai. Hentai are not about actually portraying the characters properly. That takes too much story telling skill.

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thanks for sharing!

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who the fuck's the author?

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@gearan tell that to most konosuba doujins, they do a pretty good job usually lol

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