Original Work: http://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ203560.html
Original Gallery: /g/1098175/281a536ce3/

I couldn't buy it and upload it because someone else has, but I sure as fuck can translate it, and that's exactly what I'm doing. (Along with buying the other works of that circle and uploading those too.)

THIS IS CURRENTLY A WORK-IN-PROGRESS TRANSLATION. The dialogue might get some polishing passes, font choices may change if people feel it's too hard to read (this work does give different fonts to different characters, so so am I as opposed to making it one font), and of course, the work is not yet completely translated, as I'm doing both translation work as well as image editing work (not to mention my own real-life responsibilities), with translation taking the priority over image editing.

Please don't ask me when the next part will be uploaded, as I honestly have no idea when. Hopefully it won't be something ridiculous between parts though. All five girls are now translated as of Update #2, so it all boils down to when I've got time to do the necessary image editing - but I can't say for sure it'll be updated on this day or that day.

Your feedback is important - whether good or bad! If there was stuff you didn't like, feel free to tell me what, and I might change that for a future revision. If you liked it, by all means, let me know in the comments, ratings, and favorites. That's the sort of thing that encourages me to push forward with a work. :)

01: Title Slide
02-11: Girl #1 - Mamiko
12-35: Girl #2 - Aika
36-67: Girl #3 - Rio
68: Translation Credits

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UPLOAD HISTORY:
September 23, 2017 (Initial Release)
+ 1/5 Girls presented.

September 23, 2017 (Update #1)
+ By popular demand, altered the font to increase legibility (at the cost of individuality).
+ Corrected small typo in one slide.

September 29, 2017 (Update #2)
+ Aika's story added. 2/5 girls now presented.
+ Corrected some pretty bad mistranslations with Mamiko. How I didn't catch that earlier, I don't know...
+ Mamiko's SFX redone and restyled to be more consistent with the other girls.
+ Text styling made consistent across all girls. In the original, the text style varied: Mamiko is 4px black fill, 2px white lining; the next three are 10px white fill, 2px black lining; and the last is 8px white fill, 1px black lining. All girls, as well as the intro slides, now use the 10px white fill/2px black lining version. This has the side effect of making Mamiko's section consistent, as well, since hers was completely different than the others. (Her friend's color was forced to be darkened due to this, however, no longer making it identical to the original.)
+ SFX Layer Masking increased/redone so as to better approximate the originals.
+ SFX text now gained linings so as to better approximate the originals. This also required adding them to Mamiko (who did not have them before, and likewise does not have them in the original).

November 23, 2017 (Update #3)
+ Rio's story added. 3/5 girls now presented. Have some patience for the next one, as not only does it have twice the slides of the others (and is literally two-fifths of the entire work by slide volume), it has tons of SFX and zooms, and that is easily what takes me the longest to do. Also note that Slide 03_22 isn't "missing" - it doesn't exist, even in the original upload.
+ Moved off GIMP to Photoshop starting with Rio. Hopefully this change shouldn't be too noticeable, but it saves me a LOT of work compared to before. Not having to re-stroke text each time I edit it? Only having to do a couple drag-and-drops to get the mask effects I need? Being able to much more easily bend text? Copying of text styles from one piece of text to another? Much easier text rotations? Yeah, that's gonna save me LOTS of time - just in time for the fourth girl and her 60+ slides. Special thanks to a friend of mine for showing patience while I noobed him up with questions - I'll leave him nameless, but he knows who he is, and he's awesome.
+ Aika's intro font size (32 px) now matches Mamiko's, and all other girls. As these pages are chock full of text, they have to have smaller text than most of the scenes (which use a font size of 38 px).
+ Polishing pass on Aika's text.

Please for the love of god, change the font style to something easier to read!!!

Base +9, kaze343 +6, blulaz +5, edson +12, Kiranta -6, The Naughty Shrink +6, Lostalgia +6, mangareader111 +7, me88 +6, Jobobby04 +6, Animefan268 +6, MarcusSorel +5, revex93 +6, and 3 more...

MCS117 and everyone else who upvotes his comment: Would you prefer a single font (at the cost of eliminating the individual font styles each character has in the JP original), or do you like that but just need a more readable font?

It's not too hard for me to read, but I'd really like to know how people feel.

Base +16, Jobobby04 +6, Lostalgia +6, kaerFlanA +6

I personally would prefer a single font that's easy to read over anything else. This is ultimately just porn so being able to skim read the text really quickly is more important than what it actually says.

Base +6, Jobobby04 +6, MarcusSorel +5, Forget4me +5, Lostalgia +6, Miriah +7, The Naughty Shrink +6, AloofSloth -8

By popular demand, the font has been altered.

Base +16, Jobobby04 +6, Lostalgia +6, Megaton +33, IncognitoMaud +6, eykoal +7, Miriah +7, Asuka-fag +7, dontwannaknow +6

That first page went from zero to wtf real quick.
EDIT: @DarkPulse
My body is ready.

Last edited on 24 September 2017, 03:51.

Base +6, errata +6

rockingoldensamurai: Wait until you get to, oh, girl 2, 3, 4, or 5.

They're all WTF in their own ways. Probably 4 and 5 the most.

Base +16

It's all good now. The color makes the distinction.

Base +9

Font should always be anime ace

Base +10

WTF did I just read?! o_O

Base +10

A woman on her can not get pregnant on period, only before and after the period.

Base +10, Breuger -6, AvidWebFan +6

Yes! Thank you so much for this translation. You're a hero!

Base +6

But...what if a really busted-looking chick or a man sat on that spot?

Base +7

Great update! Thank you for continuing to work on this.

Base +6

can you update the torrent link sir?

Base +6

Fucking excellent series. Thanks for the TL @MCS117.

@scrappy135
I think you're overestimating the standards of those discerning gentlemen who crawl under train benches and blindly poke their peckers up into the cabin.

Base +7

5 months and no more update, rip project.
But anyway, thanks for the hard work in providing 1/3 of the translation.

Base +9

Lokobr: It's not dead, I've just been pretty busy with life. There's a reason I warned "I'm not sure when the next update will be."

Base +18, leonhedge -7