Finally someone edited the non-resized version. :)

http://doujinshi.mugimugi.org/book/87001/Lovery-Summer-Girls!/

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Got pretty pissed when Yui came and saved Rito. This one is still the best drawn "Yusaki Riko" doujin save maybe "Riko-tan no Oyashoku.", yet instead of continuing the interesting train bit, they ruin it by having that tsundere Yui come and interrupt the parade. What was the point of that? They could have done a Yui story later and in some other way... why interrupt the train molestation?

As for those that downvotes this, why are you downvoting? Are you against having more pages or something?

@rencker
Why? The doujin could have been more pages instead. Why make less molestation pages?

@danielwain
Because Riko is a genderswap. There is no point in having a genderswap be in a relationship with a girl. The whole point of a guy turning into a girl is so that they can have sex with men. If you want yuri, simply have two girls that have always been girls have sex. As for molestation... yes there is a ton of it out there, however this is the only one with Riko that is this well drawn. The way her skirt is drawn makes it a horrible travesty when she later starts having her clothes removed and she has sex with Yui. Also you have to ask yourself, why even tease people with train molestation if you are going to make it into a boring yuri? If you want yuri then there is no point to even starting it out on the train.

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It'd really have been much better if the groper's hand was broken on page 6, and then we could have just had 20 pages of Riko/Yui.

Oh, and Riko changing back to male is completely unnecessary. There isn't nearly enough yuri with her.

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Why would you even be interested in more train molestation? There's a couple thousand hentai doujins about that, all with the same "plot" (PWP) and ugly/faceless men. How much Riko/Yui is out there? Maybe a grand total of 5 doujin. The world needs more Riko yuri doujin, there's more than enough train molestation.

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@danielwain
Because train molestation is hot?

How much Yui/Riko is there... maybe a grand total of 5...
But how much Riko train molestation is there? THIS IS THE ONLY ONE!!

So even if you want more Yui-X-Riko, Riko-X-train pervert has even less.
As for other train molestation, I don't really give a crap if there are a billion other train molestation doujin out there, because if non of them are with Riko then they don't really matter. That and the art for Riko is actually good in this one. Pretty much all the Riko stories are written by a guy that suffer from a serious case of "same face" and he always uses the same angles.

What I am saying is that this molestation was actually good. Yui saving Riko from a story perspective made no sense at all. Riko being molested, then saved and afterwards suddenly having sex with Yui made no sense. Why would Rito suddenly just have sex just because he was feeling a little horny? And if they just wanted a horny scenario then there are tons of other ways to go about it that would have made more sense... like your classic Lala invention.

What I am saying is that there was no point to the molestation scene at all. Why even include it if you are just going to ruin it and then go for a yuri scene that becomes your normal regular Yui-X-Rito ???

If anything, this doujin didn't make anyone happy. People that like Yuri only got a few pages and people that wanted to see a genderswap get molested and raped on a train were blue balled. In short, this story is horribly written since it only serves to piss people off.

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