CHAPTER 5 WILL START ON NEW YEAR

Chapter 4 of the long-running fantasy comic by Feretta

Art is not mine; you can find the autor:
as GenuineFeretta here on e-hentai
http://www.feretta.net/
http://feretta.tumblr.com/
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/feretta
https://e621.net/post/index/1/feretta
http://feretta.deviantart.com/
https://beta.furrynetwork.com/feretta/

Chapter 1: /g/624754/ef259699d6/
Chapter 1.5: /g/634713/8c022e9b68/
Chapter 2: /g/778147/28be2b3b75/
Chapter 3: /g/945018/9c3719e4a5/

Was a busy week :D Keep up this great comic!

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Nice, I was waiting for this.

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WHAT A START!!!

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With that kind of explanation..... What ... THE..... FLYING....... FUCK.

Update: Augh. Ah my god. This is feelsville, big time.

Last edited on 20 July 2017, 00:23.

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First page, vixavil is pregnant. Alright *grabs the popcorn* lets see where this goes.

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I'd like to point out she didn't actually get robbed, in fact, if I remember it right, she was ready to impale the robber with a spear quicker than you can say "chicks with dicks" if the robber didn't move out of the way.

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@epic fail:

Vixavil or Vix is the Silver-Fox companion who was with Fenfen (the main character) since the start of her journey since Chapter 2 of the story.

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At long last, i LOVE this story, and the characters. . . So now vix is pregnant¿? Please dont turn it into ntr of mindbreak, please let it continue peacefully untl its happy ending. . . Yes, im talking to you feretta ></

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"SUPER SAND LESBIAN"

Well, there go my sides, have fun on the moon my sides...

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^Bangin' too hard?

I kid :(

I was liking the mom....She seemed like a character that had so much potential D:

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She just puked and he kissed her...

Kinky.

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@Jayprince: It's not gay if the balls don't touch. She has no balls, therefore, not gay. <3

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@FakeFX Fen does have balls you can see them just about her snatch.

Pg31 Anybody else notice the spoon sword hanging on the wall in the blacksmith shop?

Last edited on 26 March 2017, 22:56.

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THAT 83 FACE ON ¨PAGE 28
ALSO MY DICK.

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"That's a very nice love you have there.."
Oh no.

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@Danesaur

What the flying fuck is that logic... In the flashback all these things never even happened yet, so how can she deserve it? Also, this world has polygamy and sex as a reward is common, it's a normal thing.
Don't take a furry comic THIS serious.

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Somethings really fucking horrible is about to happen in the next pages.

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Childhood bully not only comes back and gives a shoulder to cry on but also some hot loving AND even took it up the butt? That's a one in a million guy right there.

He is SOoooo dead by the time this flashback is over. :(

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"He is SOoooo dead by the time this flashback is over. :("

Yep, it is all there on page 29, "join the mercs", "got an appointment", 10 bucks his "appointment" is a job that will go poorly.

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Looks like his appointment is with someone...but the positions...little close? Wolf boy has an SO already? Either this ends in tears or threesomes...

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Someone please go fetch a bucket

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I tend to find myself rolling my eyes whenever this happens - one person is hurt and so they refuse to listen to an explanation, solidifying any misunderstanding into reality. It just feels like a sitcom-tier cliche.

That said, perhaps I overestimate my own emotional limits. That red fox almost deserves worse than buckethead.

EDIT: oh thank God, he got to explain. Fen would be totally justified in dumping his ass but at least he got to try to make right.

Last edited on 15 May 2017, 05:06.

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"Please do not yell at it or hit it."

...Fen's father knows her all too well.

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If that Piris fox guy is gonna die, I wouldn't mind, like at all.

Last edited on 30 May 2017, 03:46.

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"... you'll take over the family business, right?"

We're about to learn how Fen killed her first victim.

EDIT: OH SHIT I WAS RIGHT

Last edited on 30 May 2017, 23:03.

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It was at that moment that little shit knew, he fucked up.

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Anyone else notice that she doesn't have the black tips, yet? Though the black smoke in the bottom right around her wrists and body looks like she may be getting them soon.

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Meh guy kinda deserved it after saying something like that one day after Fen's mum died

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Oh my... (Piris absolutely deserved it, but the collateral damage...)

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From shit to worst case scenario in two panels...I really don't know how that last page makes me feel...

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THIS IS WHAT I WAITING FOR!

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The Darkwing Duck reference, lmaooooooooooooooooooooo!

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"I am dangerous..."
"Yeah, I noticed."

Ladies and gentlemen, Captain Understatement to the rescue!

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Looks like her fingers and feet turned black. Guess now we know why they weren't black in the flashback so far.

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does anyone know whats up with the lightning? on the 2nd to last page

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Sorry to inconvenience you, Ookamifreak. Unfortunately, that is literally the only way to add each new page. The site's functions are set up in such a way that each time you add a page to an ongoing project, it deletes the old entry and reposts the entire gallery as if it were a fully new one.

So.. No, sorry, we really can't.

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This story is so awesome <3

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(Looks in eyes and moves very close) I know what will make you relax... (reaches around for violin) Music! :D Lol!

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Is the music on page 50 Madonna's "Like a Virgin?"

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Dammit I haven't had to read sheet music in like 15 or 16 years so right now I can't tell a D note from a A flat. The best way to decipher them would be to actually play them.

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I can't help but hope this ends on Statler and Waldorf watching from a third balcony criticizing their sexual technique.

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Whoa, I think I have been spoiled by the adorably plump pandaren girls, because I so did not see red panda girl having abs like that.

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"Porn dialogue done right." Yes, yes, yes.

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"Man I don't really want a porn scene right now, this isn't as entretain-"

>Porn dialogue done right

Oh right. Artist's comments make everything worth it.

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Nice to see how the artist has improved over the years. And pretty much retconning the entire first one xD even then good job keep up the good work, though only comment could be: can the world building be a little more consistent?

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"Can the world building be a little more consistent?"

The reason a lot of things get tweaked and switched around as I go is because the comic's actual purpose is a practice project to improve my skills ;) Think of it as a first draft, everything is subject to change until the end, at which point I'll be redoing the entire thing over the course of as little time as I possibly can in order to publish this as a physical book. When that time comes, I'll be realigning all the world building stuff to match what it looks like at the end, rewriting a lot of things that are handled poorly right now, and unifying the art style of the entire thing. :3 At the moment, the vast majority of world building and lore is a case of "Ooh, y'know what'd be cool.."

That said, I'm not really retconning the first chapter at all, Lamb was never in a relationship with Fen, they're just fuck buddies and good friends, and males are still not allowed in the temple, which is why these two are in the tower rather than the temple proper right now.

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"If SHE could do it!" Pride goeth before walking funny for a week.

still worth it XD

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Page 61
Is it bad that I believe her?

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so a mass murder hu ran away ! wunder if she ever has to face that town again ? 1 day she has to go back or som on will rember her ! if she ever gonna get over this !

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