The fight starts.

page 46 and 227 have typing errors, so I add a mega link with the comic and its corrections. so sorry for the mistakes. I really hate still having these problems since I became very obsessive with the correct use of language. regards.

https://mega.nz/#!tdR0jaQT!_Mcv7ZB-oXUcR2Sm4bu5qR9vHVtNHmC3Sn_kWhLB2t4

Page 46 "Red has touched the rope by using her food." Sounds hilarious, but it should be foot. "having killling my Father" on page 227 is hilarious too. I'm not trying to diss, I'm just saying such dialogue errors can be distracting.

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yes, they are typing errors. it usually happens when you are many hours working in front of your computer, knowing only a basic english and using the google translator. I wish I could correct it but the fucking e hentai system doesn´t allow me to edit or change images. Anyways, even with a couple of mistakes, I think the idea is clear. my first comics used to have much more grammatical errors and I think I have improved a lot up to now, even though I have a lot to learn yet.

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@madscissor.Yeah, no worries. I appreciate the civil answer, keep being passionate about your work.

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