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[Eliana-Asato] Yana & Ceri: Origins [Colorized]

Western
Posted:2017-11-26 20:11
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:10.20 MiB
Length:12 pages
Favorited:151 times
Rating:
87
Average: 3.63

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Posted on 26 November 2017, 20:11 by:   Maximum_Joe    PM
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Posted on 26 November 2017, 23:28 by:   Vulor    PM
Score +37
artists skills seem proficient enough but their storytelling skills need work
Posted on 27 November 2017, 01:05 by:   crudebuster    PM
Score +65
@Vulor, everybody has to begin from somewhere and this is a good start if I ever saw one.
Posted on 27 November 2017, 02:34 by:   bloodyred    PM
Score +34
This is such an adorable story, my dream right there
Posted on 27 November 2017, 21:30 by:   TwiTwi    PM
Score +44
It's true that the writing needs some development. But nontheless, it's such a sweet story. I smile-cried a bit while reading.
Posted on 29 November 2017, 07:59 by:   reroda    PM
Score +42
@TwiTwi True, GB stories sweet, delicate and that don't become a brutal rapefest/mindrape/mindwipe are always an exception.
Posted on 05 December 2017, 05:55 by:   Alkonium    PM
Score +15
Looks like a nice story, even if a few parts should have been explained but weren't.

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