Edit: Fixed some typos, and changed some lines

Never stick your dick in thick eyebrows.

Alternative translation of chapter 1, also includes chapters 2 and 3.
I used Runa instead of Luna since her name was written in kanji.

Pretty light for a hal story, all things considered.

Translator/Editor: sneikkimies
Quality Check: Gilgamesh

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Raws:
All: /g/1139054/65a648585e/
Ch1: /s/4ead038346/1055595-362
Ch2: /s/f18faa85ec/1075328-159
Ch3: /s/f6ef7e95b3/1132151-311

Thought this would be vanilla after reading the first chapter, how wrong I was.

Should have seen it coming considering who the artist is.

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School Days? Is that you?

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What the fuck.

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>Page 67
Holy f UCK

>Last page

H O L Y F U C K

Goddamn hal, never change.

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You thought this was vanilla???
BUT IT WAS I, HAL!
The only time HAL did vanilla was pre 2016, something traumatized HAL

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I get that its HAL but this is just edgy for the sake of being edgy

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Well that went from zero to ten fucking thousand real quick

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when MC not speaking anything while he got harem.

harem end up fighting each other.

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like i mentioned in the last chapter in japanese; not my cup of tea but this is a very interesting story that goes away from the normal hentai standards. Hal like shindol has done an interesting story which gives a very different approach to the hentai we read every day here. fucked up? yes but i find it refreshing.

thanks for the upload.

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Welp I expected this from hal...
He must be a fan of kara no shoujo...

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How many years of therapy will this guy need?
Place your bets, people!

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I have to seriously question the sanity of a person that can jack off to suicide and body dismemberment.

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I was wondering how I could forget about this artist despite liking his art.
I now know how.

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Christ. I know it's hal's M.O., but honestly, this is dark for the sake of being dark. The ending came out of fucking nowhere with no buildup or anything.

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And that kids is why we wear protection

Last edited on 15 November 2017, 06:20.

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Well that just jumped the rail.

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Is it really a good idea to put your dick in someone that you know stomps animals to death? Did you really expect anything different?

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Aw damn.
I'm in for some shit aren't I?

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Yep, that's about how I would expect Hal to end it. Geez.

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Hal you never cease to dissapoint me

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Lulz, some Classic Hal. He keeps the Edge going on :P

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So... School Days has made a come back?

Oh wait it is just Hal, making the list:
-Good Sex Scenes = Check!
-Netorare = Check!
-Useless or almost plain but useless male character = Check!
-Crazy Female = Check!
-Mutilations = Check!
-Twisted Ending = Check!

*Conclusion = A typical Hal work = Great!*

(Why is a warning in the gallery if all his works have a 90% chence of being like this).

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...okay guys, that last part is just a bad dream. Yeah, yeah thats it. He felt so guilty that he cheated on his girlfriend he subconsciously portrayed her sister as a psychotic monster in his nightmare because he wanted to blame her for his weakness and he was ashamed to know that he was more into Runa than Hina. When he wakes up, he'll try to break off this affair and resolve his guilt. Hal just forgot to draw the next page, right? RIGHT?!!

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It's a shame they didn't know how to share.

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I was like:
"Ohh Hal... prepare for a ride"

"..."
There was nothing I could do to prepare for that.

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You know what? After that list of incredibly fucked up stuff that goes back years, it's kinda on them to keep hanging out with an obviously deranged psychopath.

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Ending theme https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aQ3Xs86Io00

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the ending somehow makes me sad and happy at the same time...

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From now on i'm gonna convince myself that from page 53 to 80 is a dream sequence and he will wake up in page 82 with Runa and Hina is fine and pregnant and they had a happy life.
Sadly the artist forgot to add it in. Yeah. that what happend. He has the page but he just forgot about it. Everybody can make mistakes right? right.. Please.

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Repeat with me: Never stick your dick in crazy. NEVER stick your dick in crazy. NEVER STICK YOUR DICK IN CRAZY.

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Could have gone much worse for him to be honest, he lucked out

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wtf i was expecting cukquean sex not this lol

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I love how they casually dump that the bitch was a psychopath only in the last chapter, like the signs were there you fucktards LOL
Also Runa seemed experienced think she was a slut or did some heavy research

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So nobody asking what's gonna happen with the MC when the police come to his house asking for the suicide girl and found out the mutilade body of the other girl????

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>jumps out a window cause she thinks it'll make onii-chan love her
lmao wat

Also she's not so much a yandere as just regular old crazy

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Good luck in explaining to the cops why you have a dismembered girl in your room with your jizz in her boxed in pussy anda girl throwing herself out your window who you also came inside with your pants down.

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Actually read this for the story.
This shit is seriously fucked up, but still.

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Kinda their fault, it's not that they didn't notice the signs, it's that they ignored them all, including her for not asking for clarity on these things.

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Never put your dick in crazy

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Honestly, it's not every day you see psychopaths depicted with a pretty decent level of realism in hentai. You could almost draw out the logical conclusion of the story by following Runa's progress: cruelty towards animals, obsession, lack of empathy towards humans and finally disregard for their own life. The entire story was fucked up, but also surprisingly believable and well crafted. Can't fap to it though, god damnit. Stop pulling a ShindoL on me

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Well, that's one way to make an onahole.

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As you know, madness is like gravity...all it takes is a little push.

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RIP Hina, RIP my boner

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I CAN'T FAP TO THIS (┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻

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1. I had to read it a second time to realize Hina had been... "framed."
2. Japanese censorship I: Penis entering vagina? Black that degenerate shit out!
3. Japanese censorship II: Girl licking guy's butthole? *Total clarity!*
4. Kei's butthole looks like he did time. Or spent the last five years webcasting in a schoolgirl's uniform.
5. Let's call this the Glengarry Glen Ross Rule: Always Be Pressing Charges.

ETA: BTW, this is missing some tank pages: /s/603c997af7/1173219-121 /s/6488c772e4/1173219-203

Also some color epilogue pages.

Last edited on 07 June 2021, 04:54.

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@Ensei Sohryu
Well, in Hina's case, she doesn't have much of a choice. They're twins living in the same house. The really stupid part is snapping at her sister who she knows is prone to killing animals. That's step 1 in serial killing.

Last edited on 22 August 2018, 04:27.

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The censoring is just horrid....

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This is the worst censorship I've seen in years.

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What the actual f- NOPE.

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Actually forgot about this and the ride is an enjoyable steamroller of emotions and plot. Ending still side smashed me.

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WOW, that got dark real fast.

Rules for finding a wife
1: DO NOT FUCK CRAZY
2: DO NOT FUCK CRAZY (so important it has to be repeated)
3. no married women
4. no whores
5. no one older
6. no one heavier

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The intro is long enough to forget it's Hal.

For a moment I thought this was kind of cute. Then we were reminded why Hal has a certain... reputation.

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