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The old man spent money to turn man into woman when it was cheaper to have sex with his wife.
Why the old man did not have sex with the guy's wife? It would be advantageous to have two pussy

I love gender bender, but there are stories that are poorly written and that needed to improve development.

Last edited on 20 December 2017, 21:14.

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Good to have a translation, I guess, but translators like this should really get a beta reader. The grammar is terrible...

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Can't wait for the rewrite that will actually make this good.

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wtf? How much do they think surgery that extensive costs!? Whatever debt he was in couldn't possibly justify that expense. Also why would they go to so much trouble when the wife already exists? What's the point? A shady organization that exists only to lose money??? The story finished and they promise to take care of his room and board for the rest of his life? I think he'll be getting free meals for about a month before those morons go bankrupt.

Also I'm like 99% sure MtF can't get pregnant so most of the dialogue is just nonsense.

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But it worked out, they have a permanent slave now, instead of one that'd just pay off the money owed.
also it's sci-fi so the arguments about pregnancy are stupid, you can't just change a face into anything you want, either

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It's *porn*. It doesn't have to be a goddamn literary classic for me to fap to it.

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The idea of a husband not only being turned female, but being given his wife's face & an even bigger rack, is pretty damn hot.

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Wow. This is like some new level of netorare that I did not know existed.

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i see alot of "its porn it doesnt matter" arguments allot and i just want to say people want different things from porn and sometimes a more internally consistent story leads to better porn

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