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(CT17) [7cm (Nase)] Yukidoke | Melting Snow (Nurarihyon no Mago) [English] [Smith Johnson]

(こみトレ17) [7センチ (名瀬)] ゆきどけ (ぬらりひょんの孫) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2017-12-21 17:05
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:34.67 MiB
Length:25 pages
Favorited:201 times
Rating:
84
Average: 4.20

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Posted on 21 December 2017, 17:05 by:   Smith Johnson    PM
Uploader Comment
First time translating a Doujinshi. If you want to commission or suggest a translation, message me or leave a comment.
Posted on 21 December 2017, 23:56 by:   fap_1_master    PM
Score +5
This was cute , I loved it.
Posted on 22 December 2017, 08:25 by:   Hunter Nightblood    PM
Score +27
A couple of comments.

Black and white pages should always be Grayscale. Setting them as RGB artificially inflates the file size.

Aside text should be a different font, augie is the one most people use.

Moans and Shouting should have something distinguishing them from normal text. A simple way to do this is to Bold and italicize shouts. Moans should probably be a different font (moanHand or SF Grunge Sans).

If you can, level out the page grain. It reduces the file size and looks a lot better.
Posted on 22 December 2017, 11:51 by:   Smith Johnson    PM
Score +6
Thanks Hunter, I'll try to remember.
Posted on 22 December 2017, 20:04 by:   Hollow_Gaea    PM
Score +7
Quite good for a first commision. And you picked my interest for the original series.

Can I suggest translating this?
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I wanna know what kind of Gag Reel the author gave us.

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