just one pic?.....

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At least make enough for one full row before updating this, geez
you haven't even posted enough for me to get a good grasp on what to start shitting on

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Kinda feel sorry for that old dude at the beginning.

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Frankly，a poor monologue.

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And it was at that moment.

The hunter knew

That she fucked up.

Base +6, Stupidkiller +6, Stormblaze69 +3, unknownshadows +6

These stories are always the same.

- bunch of bad people doing bad stuff
- strong, female protagonist shows up
- gets beaten
- gets fucked
- loses her brain/life
- the end

It's so boring and predictable.

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Lol story? Man I'm here to wank. Maybe don't follow rape tags?

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Why are you reading the comments if you're only here to wank?

Rape isn't a turn off for me but i still find stories like this to be boring. There's other, better comics that follow that formula so why care about this one?

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Usually I just sit back and let people come up with their own conclusions in regards to my comics. However I have two small things in regards to the matter or weathe ror not this is your typical broken hero hentai story.

1- I give tons of importance and priority to the story and plot of my comic, if I didn't care for creating a good story out of the typicla cliches of hentai to follow up on my comics, I would just draw the characters having sex from begining to end and not care for anything else.

2- I can't change your view on what you could consider and already cliched &overused story here jimbo21, but this comic is far from over (we're not even on the middle of the story yet), and if you decide to stick around, the story here may end up surprising you. ;)

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"Not even at the middle yet"

I sure hope so after 11 pages as of now. :P

I know its hard to come up with a new story everytime you do something. And I surely wouldn't want to be someone who writes a series of books or a tv show or whatever in which I'd need to come up with new shit like every week, so I know your job isn't as easy as some people might think ... but I already followed so many stories on this page which started with only a few pages and looked promising and almost all of them ended more or less the same way. I just want to see something surprising. Something entertaining.

It's like almost every horror movie ends the same way. The killer/monster/whatever hunts down a group of people, lots of people die, in the end they manage to kill the killer/monster/whatever. And the last scene is the killer/monster/whatever returning from the dead like "ohh really, this doesn't have a happy ending? I would have never guessed that"

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As a writter who respects his stories, I'm not going to spoil anything. I just hope you decide to come back as the comic goes on and give it a chance.

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Look, all I'm saying is that coming here to get hyper critical on the story of a porn piece and/or expecting it to be groundbreaking, let alone holding it against the author as if this is some sort of dog show, is a bit pedantic.

Evil_Rick, keep doing your thing. Personally, I really enjoy your art style and am eager to see where you take it.

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I for one am really looking forward to the next pages.

New page!

Though i really look forward to a scene with Malvas. That horsecock looks promising.

EDIT: Oooooh yeah. Looks like its finally time.

Last edited on 16 May 2017, 14:05.

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@evil_rick
I'm not losing anything by checking it out so i will when i see an update. I was getting a bit prematurely judgy about the story since you say it is pretty early but my point was also meant in a general sense. Even if i end up not personally enjoying it i do wish anyone well who genuinely cares about storytelling especially in regards to porn.

@xxgottsteinxx
Why are there always people like you who act like any criticism is way too excessive? The introduction to a story is important and commenting that one being formulaic and therefore boring to you is not "hyper critical". Anyone with a mild interest in hentai has seen the broken hero shtick over and over.

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A fun plot twist would be having her fucking all the demons into submission and begging for mercy! :P

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@jimbo21
To counter people like you who act like they're the high and mighty hentai police. It's one thing to offer constructive criticism, it's another to just openly rag on a piece because it doesn't fit your definition of what's "good." I don't go to pieces that don't row my boat and start telling them how they should write their erotica to fit my tastes.

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@xXGottSteinXx
I get the distinct feeling that you can't read and that you are just saying random shit. I agreed with that other guy that I find it formulaic and therefor boring. I never did anything you claimed. If you're going to just lie then don't bother talking.

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@jimbo21
Well your distinct feelings are wrong because I simply slipped, my comment about the hentai police was directed towards @HyugaTepez. My other comment still stands, however, as even you said yourself that you were getting prematurely judgy. I am perfectly fine with criticism so long as it's constructive and goes beyond "this is bad, you should feel bad, I'm going to better writers pages." Some of us like the broken hero 'shtick' and others don't, which is fine. As the author also stated, it's not even over yet. Critiquing something is alright but jumping the gun and getting all up in arms about how terrible it is just a few pages is, again, pretty pedantic. That's all I want out of people, just chill and wait until its over before raking it over the coals

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@xXGottSteinXx
His comment wasn't that scathing though. It was just pointing out that the beginning seems formulaic and that it was boring or predictable. I added onto that adding that it's hard to care about those kind of stories because it's the same stuff I've seen before.
And yea, I was getting a bit prematurely judgy because these stories very rarely differ and I wasn't expecting this one to be of any sizable length. The writer himself came in and addressed the criticism well enough.
Also, I was being super bitchy in that last comment too and apologize for that.

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@HyugaTepez

- bunch of bad people doing bad stuff
- strong, female protagonist shows up
- gets beaten
- gets fucked
- loses her brain/life
- the end

These are things that hentai readers LOVE to read. I personally LOVE the formula of these kind of stories because I think it's hot when strong female protagonists get put in their place. It's a fantasy of men and women alike, and it's porn.. There are plenty of us that like it the way it is. Maybe a lot of us WANT to see her get fucked senseless, and see her lose her brain/life.. (preferably both :P) You guys ARE way too critical of someone else's work that you can look at for FREE on a website that you also pay nothing for (well some of us anyway).. I mean.. seriously. Is he supposed to be Christopher Nolan or Zack Snyder, or insert famous comic book writer here? It's porn, not the next ground breaking mind blower, like inception. I think he's doing an excellent job. I can't wait to see more. I'd like to see different crazy things happen to her, but honestly.. another completely overly done formulaic story cliche is when a female heroine is beaten and raped and then magically comes back and saves the day even though she was completely demolished. So it goes both ways. Let the man do his thing. He takes pride in his work, and I'm sure by the time it's done it will be excellent no matter what direction he takes. There's valid, constructive criticism and then there's whining. I'm seeing a lot of whining. Keep up the great work Mr Evil_Rick, Sir :D

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.....I was looking forward to the scene with Malvas, but... this is looking like a major letdown, more and more.

Even moreso, it looks like the people here predicted correctly and she´ll just get fucked brainless and loses her life.

I sincerely hope its not that old clishee, but...

....somehow, i doubt it. Theres enough people out there that like this stuff, but this is just... not for me, to put it politely. Rape needs rape revenge.

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I don't get the whining and complaining..I guess I never bothered to read the comments on this site until recently. I like how people are saying that oh it's formulaic and predictable and it's cliche'd. Duh! It's hentai. Of course there's going to be a formulaic approach to it. Are people expecting like.. bleach or death note, but like a porn angle to it? This isn't supposed to be some amazing piece of literature. It's a fun comic meant to get people off. For the record, the heroine getting raped and losing her life is NOT a huge cliche. Search rape hentai and see what the overall theme is there. I see way more with the so called rape revenge. The old cliche of girl gets beaten, girl gets raped, magically summons energy , or just reveals she's just been playing all along and easily defeats her enemy and saves the day. The end. THAT is a cliche. A much more common one, I might add. When someone writes episodically like this, it's hard to put a finger on where the story will go and the overall tone. Sometimes the author doesn't even know where it's going to go. I truly hope that Evil_Rick doesn't listen to the negative comments on frickin e-hentai out of all places. It's one thing to criticize someone's work, it's another thing to act snobbish and tear it apart before it's done because you don't like where the story might be heading. Trying to guilt the man into writing it the way YOU want him to....smh.. I sincerely hope Evil_Rick doesn't cater to that nonsense. Good or bad criticism, just finish it at your leisure and do it the way you like it. :) I think there are plenty of us that are silent because we DO enjoy it and where it's headed. I for one hope the demons do win and kill everyone. I think that would be hilarious :P Either way, it's going to be fine. If it's not someone's cup of tea, they don't have to read it. I don't like yaoi stuff so, I just don't read it. Not too difficult.

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I don't get it myself. The people arguing against "cliche" are literally calling for the biggest cliche of all time in any kind of rape related hentai - the girl gets free and gets revenge.
The girl permanently being enslaved or losing her life is literally less than 10% of all hentai, less so if you exclude Japanese stuff with no translation.
Either these people are posting from a parallel universe with zeppelins in the sky at all hours, or they're just seeking to impose their mundane idea of a storyline on anything they see while falsely tagging anything they don't like as cliche.

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My biggest problem is that this comic is just BORING at this point.

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Changed my rating to three stars due to how the plot progresses, and the disappointing Malvas scene.

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Basically it's boring and disappointing because she isn't doing the typical cliche of somehow winning or turning the tables against demons who clearly overpower her? Yeah, whatever.

The only thing I would criticise is the total anatomy failure on the last page as of now, otherwise if you want to see the monsters lose go to 90% of any comic here.
I am sick and tired of people trying to impose their mundanity on others' works.

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well well... PLOT TWIST .... Glad to see something unexpected! And that is one more point against edgy hipsters!

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Unexpected? This entire thing was predictable from the moment she said she had a plan that was hard to pull off.

The difference between me and you mundane dumbasses is that I don't seek to impose my desires on the author and bitch incessantly when I don't get my way to the point of fabricating lies of what's cliche and what isn't.
In fact had you not made your stupid obnoxious comments I wouldn't have said much wherever it went.

But thanks for proving your intelligence matches your taste and originality. As in, you have none.
Though hey, you have your pat ending now. I assume you'll at least stop whining.

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Eh, woulda been better without the deus ex machina. It's good to not be too predictable but it cheapens conflicts when they're almost magically solved and then dump a bunch of exposition to immediately explain how everything was planned out off screen to resolve like this and how these characters were in on it the whole time and are secretly lovers and how she hated her father and wanted to kill him but never could but somehow now she can.

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Well now... a good ending, in a way. The Malvas scene is still disappointing, but at least it has a potential for a sequel. Possibly a sequel without so much rape.

I´ll raise my rating again, and please ignore the whole slew of idiots who`re now whining that it isnt the standard rape plot where the girl loses her mind and gets addicted to cock, because thats gotten old long before this point, and there´s plenty other comics and doujins they can jerk off to.

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Oh cool. A female protag that WINS in the ending.

I mean we see the female protag lose and become a cock slave time and time again so a change like this is a breath of fresh air.

Letting the female protagonist win in a comic isn't feminism killing humanity or the artist cucking guys.

There are REAL DEMONS we need to be fighting. Sarkeesian is still stealing donation money unabated.

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-derivative shit art style
-overly used tropes
-bad dialogue suggesting author knows English as a second language

rate LOL/10

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@bearonfire

You'd be right, english is not my main language, I'm a Mexican author/artists living in Mexico since the day I was born who learned english mostly all by myself 'cause my parent could not afford to pay an english teacher. I know sometimes my typos and dialogue construction can be awful and a bit anoying, my supporters on Patreon from time to time help me a lot to correct lines & phrases on the comic pages before releasing the public versions on the other webpages, something I'm very thankful for since it also helps me improve my english at the sime time. In any case, please accept my sincerest apologies if me not having english as my main language anoyed you, I promise to do better in the future.

Last edited on 04 July 2017, 01:37.

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@Evil_Rick

Compared to some other people? Your English is quite good. And it gets better all the time.

I enjoy most of your comics and art. Though as stated I do dislike "bad endings." In general.

Though you employ some rather funny endings in various comics and props for that! XD

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Peoploe; thanks to all for reading my work, thanks to Viktor0nk for taking the time of sharing it and updating it with just hours of diference from my "official" uploads to my webpages, and thanks to all of you for sharing your honest opinions; positive ones and negative ones alike, I read them all and I take them in consideration in order to improve and do better in future works. As well as your support and encouraging words. I hope that either for good or wrong you enjoyed the ride on this comic of mine.

This month I'll start my new comic, it is going to be (in context) a polar opposite to this one and is going to be about a very funny kink that surprisingly is not very common on hentai comics, I hope to see you there as well. Cheers my dear pervs!

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I'm still in awe of the liars and idiots claiming bad end rape plots are standard. AND WE WEREN'T THE ONES WHINING, YOU LYING PRICK. YOU WERE.

I didn't give a toss about the ending of the comic, I took issue with liars and frauds coming here and claiming bad ends are cliche then pitching for the most cliche heroine wins endings ever. Bunch of slimy hypocrites.

If I wanted to complain I could point out many things, such as Evil Rick apparently doesn't know the uterus isn't connected to the esophagus, the fact that he effectively had his heroine choose to be gang raped, the cringeworthy dialog and the deus ex machina ending. Note that none of those are according to my personal tastes and biases like you lot, but objective storytelling flaws.
Don't come here demanding everything be your way then project your flaws onto me. It's sickening.

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Not the ending I had imagined

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Before this was completed, my thought was "oh no, not another one of these bad end things". Then it was completed, and now all is right with the world. Just goes to show how well anyone can judge an incomplete product!

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I wasn't expecting the ending.

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The only way you could cum in a vagina and have it come out of the mouth is if you ruptured the uterus and violently ripped the organs apart and the throat open.
Needless to say she’d be dead

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I wish he added an x-ray image of their dicks rubbing inside her

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