I'm a pervert, I know. but this was fun to make and I hope you enjoy it.

Felt like reading a doctor's writing.

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This was awesome, a happy ending for both...

Thanks @johnsmith4321

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I'm sorry but I don't understand nothing!

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Honestly this was really good-- however the text was really weird. Your art is good, your writing--well what I could make of it, was porn levels.

I'd certainly recommend finding the tools to better enhance your art. I'd also recommend going that route and making the sequel using that while also considering redrawing this-- hell you could probably just trace over it so you wouldn't have to do as much work :)

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This looks unfinished, but not necessarily in a bad way. It looks a lot like a late draft for standard comic art, before final line art and lettering.
Not a bad place to start polishing to a final product.

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@johnsmith4321 A pervert? On a hentai site? Well, I would never...

Seriously tho, it's not *that* depraved. You want fucked up, I'll point you to "Elephant Infection"-

/g/975861/faf8b3b37f/

Shit gives me nightmares...

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Yeah with some inked lines and maybe typed or even inked words this would be a fun read

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@johnsmith4321

I really like your stuff, however my biggest issue is its near impossible to read it.

In future is it possible to print your dialog and put it in a different color? Like black?

Either that or add it via computer text?

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Whoa. Hes Back, Once & Again is Back!? Woohoo!

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