Wrong order.
Page 1 should be Page 3

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If your face is covered in fur you can't show blushing, this artist went out of his way to color only that aspect... strange.

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EDIT: the comment i replied to was downvoted and hidden :(

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you could say the same about the big sweat drops in anime characters, when they're embarrassed or ashamed. It's a symbol that conveys emotion, it's not supposed to be taken literally

maybe they could've used dashes for the blushing (also from anime):
http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/cit_lucky_star_kagami_blushing.jpg

...and keep them the same color as everything else

Last edited on 09 December 2017, 07:24.

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Wasn't expecting to see all my sketches here, but I won't throw a fuss about it. Pretty sure some are missing anyway. Look forward to the finished pages later on!

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Missing #15

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Can't go bowling with you, sorry Roman

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Will there be a fully colored version?

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You can find the artist work here btw:

http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/marikazemus34/

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I feel like I'm going mad or having a super strange case of Deja Vu but I could have sworn there was more of this comic.

Like, he was already sticking it in and said something along the lines of
"take a deep breath"
"that's for anal dear. how does it feel to be all the way in?"
"it's only halfway in"
and she seemed surprise.

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Me too, OtleChip. Fairly sure there was like 24-27 pages up rather than 16.

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Artist here. Somehow my sketches (up to page 18) got out and were posted here. Now, apparently they've been removed from this gallery, and replaced with nothing but what's been finished so far.

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I wonder what Frisk gets out of this. He did kinda hero the whole monster race.

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She's taken, Roman... Asgore won't be happy bout this...

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She's specifically back on the market actually.

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이게 대체 뭘까 싶다

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Page 18

Okay, Frisk better be getting some of that.

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In case anyone was wondering what page 7 reads:

Two to the one to the one to the three, Miss Toriel wants to sleep with me.
How did I make this happen this isn't how it works she's supposed to let me off with a warning and tell me this is forbidden how'd I pull this off were those retarded self-esteem pep rallies read actually good for something maybe I should be myself more often if that means I get /ss/ going no one is going to believe me if I tell them about not ever will but then how will I know not dream holy hiwb

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Oh fffffffuck why won't this update faster. The hnggg factor is too high that it's giving me blue balls in anticipation. Artist art style and toriel's milf presence is too good.

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MUFFETXFRISK SEQUEL WHEN?

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Only one kid? Ouch ok, I guess fuck you Chara.

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I, for one, am all for a Muffet and Frisk sequel.

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I like the fact that Roman's mom is named Calibri, its a nice touch

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We need an actual sequel

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I still want a sequel

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