The plot is a direct rip-off of Kurogane Kenn's "Visitor's Business," to the point that several lines are exact duplicates of the English: /g/50385/0825c0558f/ . The two works match so closely you can't claim it's a coincidence. That makes it plagiarism.
Base +6, Onisk +6, stabbybelkar +7, fapsatlightspeed +6
I wish Fem shepard could have had a relationship with Ashley but since you couldn't i just went with Liara (and nothing wrong with Liara i just wih i could have romanced Ashley with fem shepard).