Commissioned by Anonymous

TL & Edit by yours truly
proofread by Anonymous, notrealz

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https://forums.ehentaihip.cc/index.php?showtopic=236543

Original Gallery:
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Missing clean page from the original gallery

Update: I just did some stupid mistakes, uploading the "non revised" version... and didn't check the gallery. Well, thank you for @notrealz for the reminder and corrections.

The girl who became a Taimanin.
The Taimanin who became a schoolgirl gyaru who hunts old men for cash (Wait- what???)
The schoolgirl gyaru who became an egg laying factory for monsters...

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This is filled with typos and some awkward prose. You should also use contractions more often, it sounds more natural.

p.2: "How doES that sound?"
p.3: "She became an anti-geezer gyaru who huntS for old mEn"
p.4: "You got so many openingS now."
p.9: "My pussy tightenS on its own..."
p.12: "I fee like there ARE a lot of demonS today..."
p.12: "Don't tell me that I'm pregnant with that FROG's child!?"
p.14: "What a jerk, coming into THE girl's toilet (bathroom) so suddenly!"

The more obvious stuff.

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I don't really think not having the clear pages counts against it being a complete galley as a translation.

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Someone ought to combine both versions of this girl and make an anti-demon gyaru who does compensated raping with old salarymonsters. It's like compensated dating, except the demons pay her so that they can pretend to defeat and violate a strong heroine.

You can request the heroine archetype you want to conquer (with roleplay options for princess knight, female sentai team member, anti-demon swordswoman, magical girl etc.), and things like impregnation, egg laying, ryona and corruption play cost extra.

Last edited on 05 March 2018, 16:07.

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you know, for how rusty she was, she did pretty well. that's rare.

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Shit, she may suck at fighting, but she somehow still doesn't get mind break after giving birth twice, being repeatedly raped (and brutally) five times, having tentacles inside her and choke/shock sex'd. That's some tough ass shit right there -- better than those weakling schoolgirls who go down and break with one human cock.

Last edited on 05 September 2018, 07:07.

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Pretty funny story ;D

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This is fucked up.

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Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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