Another critique: If you could draw different body types, then the optics would be more....engaging; hold the attention. The ogre-female with muscles? Okay. The guy with muscles? Okay. The ripped wizard-lady however....not really likely. The voluptuousness of the females is good, but everyone having that He-man format body type is a bit redundant and ill-fitted.
Base +6, Kiranta -6, Cousinmuscle -5
Posted on 02 November 2024, 20:43 by: StrongBrush1
Score +6
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Wizard: Make him drink this potion. Orc: Okay! (immediately drinks potion)
I feel like something might have been lost in translation.