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[Chill-Chinchilla] The First Time [Life Is Strange] [English]

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Posted:2018-03-13 17:36
Parent:1083961
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Language:English  
File Size:97.58 MiB
Length:15 pages
Favorited:354 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.46

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Posted on 13 March 2018, 17:36 by:   klorpa    PM
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http://chill-chinchilla.tumblr.com/post/126365990743/the-first-time
http://chill-chinchilla.tumblr.com/post/126529156813/the-first-time-part-2-part-1
http://chill-chinchilla.tumblr.com/post/127046066003/the-first-time-part-3-part-2-part-1
http://chill-chinchilla.tumblr.com/post/133162265613/the-first-time-part-4-part-3-part-2
Posted on 05 July 2017, 00:02 by:   Bhaal29    PM
Score +7
Ironic, because the ending would put either Max in a traumatic state due to the death of her friend chloe or Victoria is ripped to shred by the Paradox tornado. How the hell would victoria, out of all the entitled bitches of this little town, would find herself in the loving embrace of the wittle lamp max is beyond me.

not saying that the art is not good, hell its really good and sweet in a fuck for the first time experience but the two character just don't make sense.....
Posted on 05 July 2017, 00:19 by:   miles_isaIsaac    PM
Score -12
Holy fucking shit...i mean...really?vic and max?
Posted on 05 July 2017, 00:57 by:   dudex    PM
Score +17
Pricefield that is all
@metroid473 I'm quite aware of the other pairings and also why people like Victoria and Max especially what happens during episode 5. It also depends on how you played the game. We're you nice to Victoria did you warm her about Nathan did you read her journal to see what she thinks of Max. If the player didn't do any of these then that paring might seem weird. I just prefer Chloe with Max it's a personal preference.
Last edited on 05 July 2017, 04:56.
Posted on 05 July 2017, 01:50 by:   TwistedGoggles    PM
Score +34
Crack-a-lack-a ship if I'd ever seen one. But I dig it.
Posted on 05 July 2017, 02:21 by:   jonhddd    PM
Score -67
I would put money on the table that the artist is female and problebly draws/writes romance manga/novels aimed towards women.

All the art talent in the goddamn world and barely even a nipple drawn.
Posted on 05 July 2017, 04:24 by:   metroid473    PM
Score +111
http://chill-chinchilla.tumblr.com/post/133162265613/the-first-time-part-4-part-3-part-2
Part 4 link. I don't know how this site works. The comic was actually finished a year ago, though. And yes, the artist is a lesbian who draws a lot of fanart. I think she's freelance. A writer she is not, though.

And now for the part where I get mad at the people in the comments for not knowing one of the biggest pairings in Life is Strange. chasefield, otherwise known as Maximum Victory, has been one of the fandom's primary pairings since the night Life is Strange first launched, Jan. 29 2015. I was one of the first people in the world to write and upload LiS fanfiction, even creating the category on ff.net. I wrote a chasefield fic, never finished it, that is still my most read story I've ever written.

The pairing is not a "crack ship." It's based largely on the rivalry trope seen so often in romance. As the episodes go on, the player (and, in turn, Max) starts to realize that Victoria is not such a bad person and has always admired Max. In Ep. 4, the Dark Room, Max finally confronts Victoria and has the option of either telling her to go fuck her selfie or letting her know how much Max values her despite her flawed personality. Victoria responds, if treated nicely beforehand, by telling Max that she's always admired the little hipster and wonders if they couldn't have been good friends in a different life with different expectations for the two of them. In Ep. 5, Max finds out that Victoria is actually a poet and never really cared for photography. She does it because her family wants her to and because of her misguided interest in Mark Jefferson.

Chasefield, as a pairing, is typically depicted as loving and nurturing. Creators portray Victoria as timid and self-concious while trying to keep an air of superiority over Max, which she almost always fails to do. A lot of this characterization came from a text Max received from Victoria in Ep. 1 after Max is really nice to Victoria on the dormitory steps. The text reads "BTW THANX BUT WERE NOT FRIENDS." Many players read this as Victoria being extremely tsundere and thus, the pairing was born.

I hope this gave all the close-minded individuals here a better understanding of a well-beloved pairing. Pricefield is a great pairing, one that took me a few episodes to truly appreciate, but there are other equally as valid pairingsl in Life is Strange. In fact, chaseprice is one of my favorites. Two destructive ladies being destructive together, how wonderful.
Posted on 05 July 2017, 05:25 by:   Mateus Gott    PM
Score +58
I like this ship
Posted on 05 July 2017, 21:35 by:   Ficfactor    PM
Score +81
Anything that gets Chloe out of the picture is an improvement.
Posted on 06 July 2017, 04:02 by:   jonhddd    PM
Score -2
@metroid473 Okay brah no need to say "closed-minded individuals" when you are clearly addressing me. Don't really care for the background of the characters that you gave because that wasn't the point I was talking about in my post. We are on a porn website, (which occassionally has nonporn stories). My problem with this story isn't the plot, isn't the characters, isn't the setting, or any of the narrative elements. My problem is that it hardly uses any of it's sexual elements.

Look at all the sexual pages and tell me those are the best the could have been.

Female artist/authors drawing/writing romance, and porn tend to suggest the sexual aspects rather than convey them. They tend to play up the emotional aspects while almost throwing the sexual details out the window. While this isn't bad when you are reading a romance manga, when you are reading a story that starts and ends with sex I would love more than just a suggestion of whats happening.

Page 1-7 Pretty damn good
Page 8-11 Terrible (no nipples or vaginas are draw no explicit visual on what's actually happening sex wise. All of these pictures suggest sex rather than use then entirety of the visual medium to actually show them.)
Page 12-15 Pretty Cool

I know what you are thinking well, you "get" whats happening. But that is the problem, this is a visual medium I shouldn't have to use my imagination on page 9 to figure out what victoria is doing to max's vagina. I shouldn't have to imagine what victoria is doing with her tongue on page 10. I shouldn't have to imagine what is where victorias hands are going on page 8. That level of restricting visual information works well in romance novels, works well in romance manga, hell even works well in romance movies. But when talking about porn posted on a porn website. I don't know man but those visual details are what sells it for me otherwise you might as well call it a non-H and write more narrative around the sex (pre-sex/post-sex) and skip the sex scene.

The problem with these entire comic works much better as a NON-H piece than it ever does as an H piece.
Last edited on 06 July 2017, 04:38.
Posted on 06 July 2017, 07:38 by:   隔雨听竹    PM
Score +12
what the hell?
i just bought the game in summer sale
darn it how could i play the game
lol
Posted on 07 July 2017, 14:09 by:   metroid473    PM
Score +67
@jonhddd: Nah, still close-minded individuals.

I get all that, I really do, but that ain't the artist's fault. She posted on tumblr and someone else grabbed them and posted it here. This comic was not designed for this website. It's meant to be a moment between Max and Victoria and shippers really dig. In hindsight, I suppose it makes sense that the goers of this site wouldn't much care for it. It's not really fap material. it's still technically h-worthy which is why it's here at all, but I see where you're coming from. I love it, but I'm also a hardcore shipper and I am its audience.
Posted on 08 July 2017, 09:41 by:   jonhddd    PM
Score -14
@metroid473 How are my criticism not valid? How is saying that the artist should put more time into making there sexual scenes more sexual a closed minded criticism? Like she is already half way there. Add nipples, vagina, and actually show cunninglingus. How is saying an artist could do better when the clearly could do better closed minded?

Just because you like it and are satified with it, doesn't mean I am closed minded for saying it could be better.

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