I remember back when CGrascal was notorious for doing bad translations.
I am SO glad to see how you've grown over the years!
You've taken advice, used it well, and now do great works like this!
As for the doujin, I'm glad to see Elphelt getting some translation love!
Always nice to see the marriage-obsessed girl get porked.
Thanks a bunch for translating this!

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My nose is bleeding... must be all the sugar...

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One of cutest hidden pervs in video games.

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methinks the first commenter must be drunk. or he's trolling. or maybe he's being sarcastic instead.
in any case i just don't see where the so-called improvement is.

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