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[Chochi] Lovely Pets - Chapter 1 (Fixed Text)

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Posted:2018-04-11 02:12
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:41.43 MiB
Length:35 pages
Favorited:421 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.56

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Posted on 11 April 2018, 02:12 by:   GBirkin    PM
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Chapter 1 of Chochi's Lovely Pets, with the texts edited to fix grammar errors and fit better on the speech bubbles.
Posted on 14 April 2018, 20:07 by:   Hotrod48    PM
Score +39
"Edited to fix grammar errors"
I'm sorry but did you even re-read the comic to double check for errors you missed? They're literally everywhere in this comic. It honestly doesn't even look like you made any changes at all.
Posted on 14 April 2018, 20:21 by:   GBirkin    PM
Score +27
++Hotrod48 Thanks for the feedback

Can you tell me which grammar errors I missed? If you do please send it via DM, so I can edit those and change the pages with them with the corrected ones.
Posted on 24 April 2018, 09:33 by:   kedamono1    PM
Score +27
the fucking chochi have a patreon?
1 fucking page every 5 years is not enought
Posted on 29 July 2018, 04:09 by:   Project_Demise    PM
Score +25
Fixed text my ass.

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