Here's a story to pull your heartstrings.

Translation: CrowKarasu
Editing: Constipat8

Special thanks to these peoeple for the extra help.
QC/PR: freudia, guacamole, Nero, Rokusanji.
Color page cleaning: Donna.

Raws

wtf man, I come here to fap my problems away, not get feels :(

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Ehhhh? WTF!

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I mean, I wasn't expecting a colored double suicide page.

But it shure did hit my feels hard

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And that's why when you start seeing people others cannot see you better talk to somebody real.

Fuck, this is why I dont start real romantic relationships. They make you go insane !!!

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@aeroplume72 I believe they knew each other before his death.

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Page 16 last panel: oh! He really is a ghost! Lolz. Supernatural sex indeed. Perhaps he's just her imagination?
He says he's 18 at one point, I think he's older than her? Before he died or he kept aging afterwards?

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They knew each other, since the guy? says she hardly changed

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Somehow, this is depressing.

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This is deep shit man.

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Wtf why did they suicide? Do they want to turn into rotting grotesque corpse because they feel sad? Dont they want to continue their love? Ending is so fucking defeatist; Hitler would rise from the grave and order their execution.

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Dat Page 27 ..... DAYUM!

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Tfw your bae is a ghost so you kill yourself to be a ghost too.

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...no.
Guess I'll just delete page 27.

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At least she seems happy in the last panel.

Last edited on 19 April 2018, 05:15.

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......this might just be my favorite thing on this site. It's..like if Aku no Hana had ended at the festival. I like this. A lot.

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Well that was dark.

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Only the Japanese can make you cry with a hentai.

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Que final mas epico, estos japoneses si que saben hacer historias con profundidad

Gracias por la traduccion

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This must be one of those M. Night Shyamalan endings.

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Tfw you know you'll never love, or be loved that much by someone.

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Pg. 25-27: "weirdly ominous mood, huh... oh fuck..."

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Depressing? Nah. She wanted to be with him forever so she decided to die and become a ghost like him. For me that's a happy (but indeed weird) ending.

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Perhaps the author is trying to portray the harsh reality of Japanese youths.

A school life with so much pressure and stress that it rids the young students of romantic feeling.

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I guess its a way to have a happy ending

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Aaaaaaand... now I am depressed

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Am I the only person who is reminded of the vocaloid song "Rolling Girl"?

Feels way too much like that, where the guy at the end was implied to be a personification of her depression telling her it is okay to stop "rolling" since it is so tiring. The "rolling" in this case meant living and breathing, and at the end, she stopped breathing.

I for one don't think that he is actually real. I believe him to be a figment of her imagination, telling her it is okay to stop continuing a pointless existence. Thus I don't find this romantic, only sad. Not saying the story is bad or anything, just giving my own interpretation.

If anyone is interested in the song, check this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69RopvRxJ-U

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Its not really all that depressing when you consider the fact that life after death in some form is essentially confirmed by the ghost existence. But yeah, given the tone of the manga, is totally plausible that the dude isn't even real.

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They didn't do much with the ghost mechanic, also that colored page at the end is ominous.

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So here's the plot based on the dialogue. The guy killed himself for some unexplained reason. Couple years pass and the girl enters her first year of high school. It seems that the girl knew the boy before his suicide. That's why she goes to the roof top despite hearing the rumors and risking getting into trouble. She wanted to see the place he decided to jump from and found his ghost instead. It explains why she broke the rules and why she seems to love him. Doesn't seem like she's going to the roof to avoid bullies since there was a girl who invited her out. She spends time with him, does the dirty and decides to also kill herself. She might have had her own problems or just simply wanted to be with him at all times. Pretty bitter Sweet ending.

Emphasis was placed on the girl who invited her to karaoke. This doujin needs a part two so we get the full story.

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This reminds me of another manga, but instead of the guy seeing the girl's panties, the girl sees the guy with no pants as she comes to the uppermost area of the building. At some point they have sex right between those grades and you can see the streets from her POV, and it looks really high up.

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this could have been an amazing romance manga. couldn't even fap to it

Last edited on 24 May 2018, 09:59.

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Plot twist: The guy thinks he is a ghost but he isn't and is just suffering from chuunibyou and convinced the girl that he is indeed definitely a ghost and the girl just believed him.

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I did not expect it to end like this ;_;

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how about the fact that the boy is just a imaginary product from the girl's willingness to suicide and the sexual intercourse itself eventually drive the girl to jump off the rooftop

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