I just want to die

jesus christ

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Thx for the feedback

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jesus would not approve this.

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best style i would say is pages 2 and 3 . with page 4 being a good rough draft

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@elgringo Thx for the feedback

@Kashiri Thx for the feedback

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I think 4 is the best. Although it would be nice if it was inked and coloured.

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Okay, but y tho

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The drawings are too stiff, as if you made this using the line tool in mspaint. The dick looks weird as well like and the art style is inconsistant.

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@Zazlamel Arentoch Thx for the feedback

@Gate56 Thx for the feedback

Last edited on 11 August 2017, 03:13.

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@uploader You ask for 'feedback' and bitch when people tear into this grade school line work.
This whole 'comic' reeks of a single draft without practice. The lines are soppy, people look tubby, pudgy and blobby. Each and every page has a different 'style'. (if you can call it that). The faces look really hand drawn (sloppy), and the dick drawings looks like you copied it from other artists. The plot is very disconnected, it feels like there should be more panels per page to explain more of what's going on. The text is handwritten and hard to read.

Gate56 gave legit feedback. They're telling you what they think is wrong with your 'art', but you take offence. You don't need to be an artist to know bad art in the same way you don't need a helicopter operators licence to know that helicopters don't belong in trees.

You look like you have a -long- way to go in terms of artistic capability and maturity. Go back to school and take a few lessons.

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@TLNTG2 Thx for the feedback

Last edited on 11 August 2017, 03:12.

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@uploader I really like the idea of a futasitter, but I feel that artistically you didn't execute the visuals well enough.

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@jonhddd Thx for the feedback

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@ uploader Practice, practice, practice. Page 4 is ok, the faces and expressions are acceptable. The colouring on page 7 is alright, but I'd advise you to practice shading.

Learn some human anatomy, posing and storyboarding. The most memorable porn comics had either a compelling story, or some great humor.

Look at other artists' work and borrow from that.

http://zenpencils.com/comic/kirby/

Read that. It'll help. I wish you all the best.

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The only good thing I can say is that your concepts aren't too bad. You have a clear, easy to follow story here, although it is missing some details.

But your fundamentals are severely lacking. You need some classes, or at least some decent art books to start with. Once you have proper information on the fundamentals, you need more practice. And I don't mean making more comics like this. You need to fill some sketchbooks. Nobody is ever able to draw well immediately, without spending many hours practicing first.

Since this is pornography, you also need to learn your anatomy. And you need to practice it a lot, so that you can keep it consistent throughout a comic.

Come back after a few hundred hours.

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@cantstopwhacking Thx for the feedback
@rabidalien Thx for the feedback

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How was this piece of garbage bumped back up to the top of the futanari and english tags? It so god awful I lost my arousal in an instant.

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@Mayashi Thx for the feedback

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colors and shading have helped immensely over the original black and white sketches. still a little flat in places where there needs to show depth. also portions of the body size needs some adjustment. overall 6-7/10. nice to see it continue and get better

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Its clear that you're trying to find your style but that doesn't this bad. Honestly I hope you keep with the smut drawing so I can personally watch how your art will develop. Luckily you didn't fall into the trap of having large amounts of text trying to make the story more memorable. Also don't take the hate so serious because no matter what when youre making fetish art like futa theres going to be people that disagree.

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