I thought it would be fun to take some of the stills from ICSTOR's game and use them to create a coherent story. Also I modified some of the dialogue to hopefully make it more realistic.
Fantastic job man! It's what game creators should do - after finishing the game, making a comic of it for people who want to FAP. I would support such a creators with my money. So please dear Gordon - make mooooore of it :)
"Because your dad was a honorable man, he married your mom." and "He would cheat on me with your mom" in a same page isn't how i would describe someone as honorable. Didn't expect the "she is a virgin" pattern too. But again this is a rewrite so...