Little Sister [English] [Rewrite] [EZ Rewriter]

Posted on 06 May 2018, 18:47 by: ezrewriter

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This is a rewrite not a translation

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Posted on 06 May 2018, 19:45 by: longjohn1123

so basically you made the english translation more "comprehensive".... (do translate chapter 2 if you can as the story and everything that comes with it is pretty good :D)

Posted on 06 May 2018, 23:42 by: Naruto0116

'You can even see her little pussy!!' I don't know why but that line made me laugh.

Posted on 07 May 2018, 00:02 by: Mrsuperhappy

@longjohn1123

"This is a rewrite not a translation"

Uploader is very unlikely to be translating chapter 2.

Posted on 07 May 2018, 05:10 by: Imagine_Breaker

So by rewrite does he mean he made up the dialogue by himself and has nothing to do with the original writing? Or did he rewrite another translation into English. I is confused by this concept.

Posted on 07 May 2018, 06:03 by: Zweihaender

@ Imagine_Breaker:
Rewrite means a shitty work using another artists effort to try sucking some of his work, having TINY TO NOTHING of the original idea.
This guy is either brave or stupid... no one likes its work, no one praises this shit, n still is stpid enough to post it here... such a waste of space...

Posted on 07 May 2018, 06:23 by: Remeark

HE'S BACK YET AGAIN

Posted on 07 May 2018, 07:58 by: sonictmp

This is shit not something anyone asked for.

Posted on 07 May 2018, 08:55 by: lala 342

this is trash

Posted on 07 May 2018, 10:41 by: The Goat is Watching

@Zweihaender Speaking as someone who has worked on at least one big official English translation, I think you and some others here are really overreacting.

The only reason anyone should get up in arms about a rewrite is if the uploader doesn't make it clear that it's a rewrite. Because at that point, you've crossed into plagiarism. But Ezra is up front about that, so it hardly qualifies as theft. This type of work is harmless. It's lazy, at worst. A proper English translation will come along, sooner or later.

Whether or not a rewrite is good or bad depends on the re-writer. I don't think Ezra's writing is anything special, but I feel the same way about the vast majority of actual translations here. A lot of porn writers are pretty bad, and a good English translation isn't going to do anything to fix that. Even as a writer, I Just don't see other people's work being so sacred that it's somehow a violation to write an alternate script to an existing work. That just seems like putting artists on a pedestal, and that's not a good way to look at people.

If someone wants to make shit up and doesn't try to hide that their work isn't a proper translation, it's not hurting anybody. If someone did a rewrite of something I wrote, I'm sure I wouldn't be thrilled. But as long as they're up front about their rewrite, it's hardly a violation. At worst it's only marginally worse than illegally uploading an artists work without their consent.

I can't speak for how Kouji would feel, but if someone came out with an English rewrite of his comic that I proofread last year (/g/1057551/d058a74b24/) it's not going to sully what I've done. Had the rewrite come out first, that just means people would be even more excited to see an actual translation instead of a rewrite. People liked the translation I helped make, and no one can take that from me.

All this outrage seems extremely silly.

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Posted on 07 May 2018, 10:46 by: @Inkblot

"This is a rewrite, not a translation." No, this is trash, not a translation.

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Posted on 07 May 2018, 11:22 by: yetsun

What a waste of time on the rewriter's part. You already put in the work of cleaning and typesetting, but chose to re-write the story

If you had actually got someone who understood Japanese to provide you a script, you'd actually be contributing to the doujin translation scene

Posted on 07 May 2018, 14:15 by: The Goat is Watching

Given how long they've been doing this, and that they aren't deterred by negative responses, I assume they do it because they enjoy it.

Saying it's a waste of time, because it doesn't provide the community with something most people want, seems kind of egocentric.

Posted on 11 May 2018, 16:54 by: popioo1234

i didnt even know he's still active

Posted on 28 May 2018, 12:56 by: daniel9612

Why people praising this translation? are they like massive fags?

Posted on 11 June 2018, 07:12 by: NightLillith

Having read both a translation of the original and this rewrite, I have to say that I kinda prefer the rewrite. I mean, this one explains why they have to sneak around. The original does not, despite what the text says

I don't inherently hate rewrites. I just hate how some rewriters don't even bother with a font that looks right or cleaning things up.

I bet that if Erza didn't tag this as a rewrite and uploaded it elsewhere under a different username, chances are that there wouldn't be as much vitriol as we are seeing here now.

Besides, what's to say that erza isn't a proper fan-translator and that this is his private project at attempting to clean up the reputation of rewrites. I mean, it's pretty much just hentai fanfic.

Posted on 05 February 2019, 17:04 by: peg4sus

This story really turns on more than the actual script. Keep it up! Waiting for the 3rd part.

Posted on 09 March 2019, 16:19 by: arakure402

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Posted:	2018-05-06 18:47
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Language:	English RW
File Size:	31.47 MiB
Length:	24 pages
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