This is a rewrite not a translation.

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English translation @ /s/ab022ec961/881663-113

Silly ezrewriter, its been in English for years.

English translation @ /s/ab022ec961/881663-113

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Can't prompt a spur of the moment translation if it already has a proper translation.

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sometimes i want to believe that ezrewriter actually does do all this to spite actual translators into translating the things he wants, but then I see stuff like this and I honestly don't know anymore

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The actual translation is much, much darker, and deals with rape in its real form- not the fantasy depiction in hentai, but the kind that scars you just as deep as any blade. The art loses so much of that emotion with this rewrite.

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If you dont bloody stop this I am going to phone your mom and tell her you are doing this shit

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Shtty rewrite i might as well go read moon rune and not understand anything at all

Shtty rewrite i might as well go read moon rune and not understand anything at all

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EZ, would you take a look at some mom-son stories by N.O. Chachamaru?
Those things never get translated.

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Rewrite. FILTH

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This is the single most retarded thing I've seen yet. Not only do we need to remind you that no one wants rewrites, but you have made a fanfiction out of something that has long been translated. It's not even spite at this point, it's just a textbook example of autism.

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@sonictmp

People shouldn't be calling stuff a "textbook example" of autism when it's clear you don't even know what autism really is.

Fuck you for making me "defend" ezrewriter.

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So, does this autistic tard cannot compute that no one wants him here wasting space?

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I'm gonna be honest here.

Ezwriters one doesn't seem as fucking sad as the one that was translated earlier. XD

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What a pile of garbage. Seriously, stop flooding this site with your trash

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@homogenized Don't act like some martyr when you know I'm right. He's been told every time he's posted to stop this shit by multiple people. He very obviously doesn't understand these communications and has serious problems with interactions here. That's basic autism that you can google. Wasting your time being an idiot defending a retard is pathetic.

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I...

...I actually generally like EZ Rewriter's stuff. He writes the dialogue like it's dirty western porn and I'm a dirty westerner. Things like "Fuck me harder" works better for me than "my hips are moving on their own".

Besides even the real translators fudge things to make it better for an English audience.
ex1: 「ふああっ、もう、ダメえええっ・・・ぁああ！」
Real translation: “I can’t… no more…!!"
What they'll write: “Oh God… I’m gonna come…!”
The latter contains none of the original Japanese but it captures the essence of the scene better.
ex2: 「はぁあああっ、あっ・・・はぁううぅうううんっ！」
This is panting (Romanji: Haaaa, aa… hauuuuun!). っ has no phonetic value, except to cut short whatever preceded it and う "feminizes" the panting while having no use in English.
You know what many, if not most, translators would do here? Outright delete the line.

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Freak-show titties

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WTF IS THIS BULL SHIT!? THIS IS NIT THE RIGHT TRANSLATION!!! FUCK THIS

The real translation is better, this person just took it and inserted his fanfiction into it

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Keep them coming Ez, and don't care about those malcontents.

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