RAW: /g/159513/c5aaaa8f11/

Another craptastic release from me. I suck :/

Anyways, Images 49 and 52, death by snu snu!!

Note: I definitely should've checked some of the lines before posting... I am in the process of trying to make things more fluid, but if anyone's got any ideas (which are probably going to sound better than my own), don't be afraid of posting a comment down below.

Note 2: I haven't watched the OVA's for a long time, nor have I played the games, so some of the names are probably incorrect (like Grenel, World Tree and the names of the Realms). If anyone could chime in on them for me, I would gladly edit them when I update the texts.

Vilnius: I can be both good and bad at the same time :P
In this(most *cough*) case, I think I am just too hasty and I end up trying to stay too true to the original Japanese text instead of being more correct in the language I translate to. I have to accept that some of the text will be lost (and some will be added) to make it sound more fluidly.

Temporarily uploaded my updates here: https://imgur.com/a/81C3jXX
I'll wait a day or 2 before uploading those changes here, just in case someone finds better phrasing than me.

your craptastic release deserves my thanks at least x)

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@q91 - Your English in the comments seems fine so I'm confused as to why it's so bad in the translation.

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Deedlit and Pirotess?Classic. Thanks for this.

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I love the dark elf very much.

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q91, "where" instead of "were" is your recurring mistake.

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Sorry for the constant uploads. I hope this will be the last... oh god I just jinxed it, didn't I?

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Dammit Parn, this is why you don't leave your elf unattended.

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