An English version that's not done by ganfal79 and actually readable! My translation was done by taking the Spanish version done by serres, putting that into Google Translate, and then fixing up the English to have it make sense (while cross referencing with the original). So will it be 100% correct? No but, it'll at least be readable and you'll get a better idea of what's going on.

If anyone does an actual translation of this, send me a message and we can work something out so then this gets updated. Since I don't mind giving out the clean/typesetting work I've done for this.

Spanish: /g/1035070/e57c417b36/
RAW: /s/ab2994e517/1032063-251

Google translate, huh? Well, I guess that Spanish to English is a bit better than the results that you get from Japanese to English with google. Seems alright. p. 15 has different typesetting, so it seems - the raw has some variations as well, but not the same as you apply. Thanks for sharing, it's a fun story to read.

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That beautiful anus
That anal "immortal medicine" bead
That "use my other hole next" quote
>no actual anal penetration

my dick confused with all of these anal tease

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so this is a translation from Spanish to English. i dunno about you guys, but i can read spanish pretty well (native), and the one in spanish feels dodgy as fuck. like it was translated from japanese using google translate.

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It better than the last one, but i'll still rather wait for an actual translation instead of a double machine translation

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Wait, he's hiding her from the people so that he can continue the construction, thus destroying the ruins? I know that he needs a job, but that's a huge red flag, never destroy ancient ruins for some stupid constructions.

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@LizNevada it reads like international spanish, very dry and dorky imo, though dunno if it's machine translated since there are words that do indicate a regional bias (dunno which one).

I can never read spa translations for that very same reason, and the english in this one feels kinda stiff too. I'd rather wait for just a proper one too... also, what was the hurry? it's not like Z-Ton works go forgotten anyway, just be patient people.

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There was red on his dick when he pulled out, was she a virgin?

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Wow good stuff, thanks for the upload/translate!

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sick burn bro, tho i also hate when they are bad quality, upscaled, downscaled or have bad font.

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Even though this is much more readable than the previous TL, it's still quite obvious that it needs some good QCing.

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In Japan, zombies drink your dick... in USA, zombies just drink your face

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@metalsensei

It's high likely that they would take her from him and vivisect on some lab or give her to some fat ceo fuck with all the drugs

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This is great stuff, thanks for the translation!

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@imnotamused

not really like international spanish, which as someone that speaks 4 languages like me are used to. but like machine translated one.
example: "aqui no es egipto" this sounds mechanically translated. the correct natural way would "esto no es egipto"

its obvious they didnt proofread it

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Bueno amigo que hablas 4 idiomas. El español tiene muchas formas de hablarse, en mi región decir "esto no es Egipto" suena bastante raro. Lo mas común es decir ""aquí no es Egipto"

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I need a 200+ tank of this killer shit!!!

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pues vaya que si suena bastante extranio, pero alas, el espaniol tiene como 40 dialectos distintos si tomamos a todos los paises latinos asi que pues, ni para que discutir

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translate into spanish from japanese
*fix it up*
translate into english from spanish
*fix it up a bit more*

well it let me fap so i have no complaints

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@LizNevada What you're saying just cracked me up. I only know 2 languages (learning third one) but every so often I did the "pull i through machine, then fix it, so it feels good" routine, when I had some phrase that I knew perfectly how to say in one lang but couldn't find the exact words in the other.
If what you're saying is true, then grand kudos to @Flutters, for I wouldn't notice.
(Alas, the strangest translation I read are ones that try calk one language' flow into the other. Even within one family they still read like goddamn medieval poetry)
Also basically what @mecchist said.

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- What is the diagnois doctor?

Page 9: "It looks like my cock has already reached her brain"

- Damn. Time of death 8am.

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Truly unfortunate having a thing for ancient Egyptian bitches because there is fuck all content of them, very sad. This was pretty nice tho.

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>My translation was done by taking the Spanish version done by serres, putting that into Google Translate, and then fixing up the English to have it make sense
tagging rtl (uploader comment)

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