My last commission for a long while. Enjoy.

Translated by N04h
Commissioned by coNTRa69

awesome. thank you for the translation.

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Surprisingly sane ending. Very little doujin-logic involved in this whole thing.

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Both siblings were pretty dumb, especially the brother. I also kind of liked how the NTR guy actually ended up developing feelings for her. Pretty nice story, the brother was so stupid I was almost rooting for the NTR guy.

This group, Mashira Dou, always has some of the best ntr stories, but I personally thought the art in some of the other NTR works was better.

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Bittersweet ending. But probably the best ending you could hope for in a story like this.

Probably one of the better written NTR stories out there... Thanks for the upload!

Last edited on 22 June 2018, 12:45.

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Pretty generic ntr trend except...
The brother at least grew a pair near the end though...

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A story that does not have a girl slave of pleasure and emotions are the how according to which things are for someone one way or another.

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I think people overrate this artist's writing. To me it just feels like Josei smut with colored in genitals. The ending was a little lazy and the NTR was such a pointless development. Not to knack against NTR in general, I'm just saying that the ending here probably would have been the same with or without that scene taking place. Though I get the point of the bite>NTR parallel, the pair had already resolved their feelings, for the most part, on the night he rejected her. The story should have ended there in the shed with the brother finding her first instead of a surprise rapist conveniently showing up at the worst time completely by accident. As for their final resolution to break up, I wish the story focused more on why it happened instead of only why it's tragic. They accepted the "step-sibling incest is wrong" mindset way too easily.

Last edited on 22 June 2018, 16:41.

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First of all, thank you so much for translation. I have been waiting it for a long time.
5 stars from me with so much appreate

@msPaint: Dear msPaint, Japanese tradition do not like what you are thinking (Most of Asia countries do not accept this relationship). "step-sibling incest" is wrong, if you revealed this relationship, you will not accept in your family as well as social. You can be reject at everywhere. In some cases, you and your lover must run far far away to where local people doesn't know who you are to start everything again. They're student so where do you think they can run.

Last edited on 22 June 2018, 17:09.

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@msPaint: the NTR is what makes it hot...taking it out turns the story into a vanilla.

personally i wish that they kept the original matsuri ending instead and just showed the brother seeing matsuri with ripped stockings and letting the reader's imagination fill in the rest. but oh well

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I blame Oreimo for this.

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@joker901

no that guy's a PURE asshole from the beginning, never trust anyone that takes AND SHARES pics that can ruin your life in the future
oh and when it comes to rape, victims are treated more like criminals through questioning and distrust backlash if they come forward and that's in the US, Japan is wayy worst

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As I expected, an alpha fux, beta bux ending.

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She wins by the end.

Her brother is broken but she seems to regret that, him saying that he wants to go back to how they used to be indicates that he'll accept the relationship she wanted and they know there's no coming back if they go forward.

The rapist is an asshole no matter how you try to make him like ale cause you know he raped.

This is probably the most sane ending this artist ever did and I can't help but think of the two bong a couple and the rapist having his hear broken.

She gets her brother at the price of her virginity and she doesn't succumb to the rapist; hell the rapist looks like he got NTRd more than the brother did at the end.

The story is realistic to a degree and I doubt the rapist would go around saying he raped a girl and he'll b liked for it unlik other works were everyon thinks you're a god for raping someone.

Yuuichi groowing a pair but being broken is sad but he is willing to do anything at the end to not lose Matsuri and I can't help but feel that they'll be together as hopeful as that sounds.

Last edited on 17 October 2018, 23:51.

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What a disappointing ending. The 'brother' is an autistic cuck who thinks he's actually related to the girl. The bleach hair guy is the real hero here.

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Major disappointment. The thug was too soft. Wanted to see her break instead of this boring ass ending.

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Rushed and disappointing ending. Art is meh.

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It's just the story of a girl who gets rejected by her crush, who is also her stepbro, and finds comfort in the arms of the first guy who comes along and the crush who finally realizes he wants the girl.

In the end, even if the girl gave her virginity to the first guy who came along, she managed to win her crush so it's her 100% victory. The crush is just punished for his rejection knowing that his sister is with another guy and the offender only gains from deflowering and possessing her for one night.

Besides, she only had protected sex with the offender, so it doesn't really matter, if the story ends here, it's the offender who got NTRed.

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This artist loves writting this kind of plot. Rejected by crush and then gives therm a bit light of hope. Just look at the ending turned out. Yeah sure the asshole guy share the pic but when his friends ask for a dip, the guy actually brush them off.

In the end, the girl still choosing her bro. YES EXACTLY. I dont know why but this artist's work, especially on NTR guy is like "win a battle and lose the war" tbh.

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