TL : Siegel
ED : Siegel
PR : gintokiftw

Story kinda fun... Enjoy

What an amusing ending.

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enjoyed it honestly it's always kamoshida for the ntr bullshit and honestly, that's really dumb cause it's a fucking waste

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What an interesting shadow

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Persona users can't have palaces... why does every P5 doujin that uses palaces in an original story forget this? That one MC NTR one had the fat guy go into the MC's palace for some reason

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that was quite funny.

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@ladiesman4427

I don't think it says he's a Persona user at any point - just that he's part of the group. You could say he's like Mishima, maybe not a core member of the Phantom Thieves but still in on the action somehow.

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A shitty self insert doujin made by fat ass otaku. Just like the NTR garbage that obese trump chimpys masterbait too.

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ladiesman4427 => The only rule i see broken is that there is no shadow attacking the real him somehow... But since he seems friend with his own shadow, maybe that cancel it ?

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are the paralel world navigators these personas? never played any game nor saw the series.

btw, is it really mind control when they're clones with a different program?

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Do you think that the slave shadow on the last page is noticibly more feminine looking?

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I'm petty sure those are cognitions that guy was seeing, I hope.

Why didn't you use this version to translate? /g/1050294/4086660585/ It has less censoring.

Last edited on 16 January 2019, 08:18.

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